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2PepperCornPie
nice chapt!
is the loony a kid by any chance? just it sounded like a nervous kid wanting to meet the bots?
I absoultly LOVE Grimlock! he's perfect and the relationship between simmons and grimlock is great as well as funny-grimlock has a pet name 'Fang!'- and he keeps following simmons around.
Loved the skywarp chase chapt with sideswipe, my fav chapter... i think? hmmmm i don't know...i'm going to read it again.
Anyway nice chapt, keep up the great work and when will the next chapt be out by? can't wait to see hoe they'll torcher simmons next.
*madly laughing* PepperCornPie
2PepperCornPienice chapt!
is the loony a kid by any chance? just it sounded like a nervous kid wanting to meet the bots?
I absoultly LOVE Grimlock! he's perfect and the relationship between simmons and grimlock is great as well as funny-grimlock has a pet name 'Fang!'- and he keeps following simmons around.
Loved the skywarp chase chapt with sideswipe, my fav chapter... i think? hmmmm i don't know...i'm going to read it again.
Anyway nice chapt, keep up the great work and when will the next chapt be out by? can't wait to see hoe they'll torcher simmons next.
*madly laughing* PepperCornPie
11/29/2012 c21 3Mama May-Eye
I only hope the story will continue to focus on my Simmons and not the addition of this new guy, which I can guess at the identity of unless this is an original character. Cannot wait for more!
3Mama May-EyeI only hope the story will continue to focus on my Simmons and not the addition of this new guy, which I can guess at the identity of unless this is an original character. Cannot wait for more!
11/29/2012 c14 Mama May-Eye
I REALLY don't like Mikaela's attitude. I hope she gets better soon because right now her PMS-ing is ticking me the eff off. On another note, I'm REALLY glad Simmons is getting some friends and love around here. There are too many fics about him being a lonely a**hole. DO hope Mikaela goes AWAY right now, though.
I REALLY don't like Mikaela's attitude. I hope she gets better soon because right now her PMS-ing is ticking me the eff off. On another note, I'm REALLY glad Simmons is getting some friends and love around here. There are too many fics about him being a lonely a**hole. DO hope Mikaela goes AWAY right now, though.
11/27/2012 c21 5CrazywithaComputer
I love this story! I realize you haven't updated in a while, but I hope you're going to continue it! Don't leave me hangin'.
5CrazywithaComputerI love this story! I realize you haven't updated in a while, but I hope you're going to continue it! Don't leave me hangin'.
11/6/2012 c21 3Agent 0r4ng3
Oh, I love this. :) so many fantastic one-liners!
Not updated fr two years though...
3Agent 0r4ng3Oh, I love this. :) so many fantastic one-liners!
Not updated fr two years though...
10/7/2012 c21 Yorozuya
To be continued... And quickly, I promise!
She said... In 2010... It's now 2012...
Sniff, I want more... I barely get good rage/sarcasm/drama...
To be continued... And quickly, I promise!
She said... In 2010... It's now 2012...
Sniff, I want more... I barely get good rage/sarcasm/drama...
5/31/2012 c21 2ZombieXoX
This is absolutely hilarious. I mean seriously you're a genius xD Everything is done perfectly and your characterisation of Simmons sums him up to a T... Gunna read the whole thing again.
2ZombieXoXThis is absolutely hilarious. I mean seriously you're a genius xD Everything is done perfectly and your characterisation of Simmons sums him up to a T... Gunna read the whole thing again.
1/19/2012 c8 3Robin Grimm-Goodfellow
I would like to loudly demand that Simmons be slapped for comparing a giant alien robot to a 13-yr old girl. I happen to remember vividly being one, and I was NOT that prissy. At all. (But, also, I was the one who blew off PE and other 'all the guys beat up the girls until one girl has a breakdown and tries to attack the boy who teased her only to be restrained by five+ girls clinging to girl 1' events to watch giant alien robots beat eachother up.
3Robin Grimm-GoodfellowI would like to loudly demand that Simmons be slapped for comparing a giant alien robot to a 13-yr old girl. I happen to remember vividly being one, and I was NOT that prissy. At all. (But, also, I was the one who blew off PE and other 'all the guys beat up the girls until one girl has a breakdown and tries to attack the boy who teased her only to be restrained by five+ girls clinging to girl 1' events to watch giant alien robots beat eachother up.
1/7/2012 c21 12LucasVN
I finished this at last.
Overall, I love your characterization of Simmons. He is an oddball character to say the least, and you made his behavior understandable and believable. And, the situations he had to deal with are hilarious. Taking a real F-16 and modifying it for remote-control flight for Jet Judo practice? Priceless. Simmons getting wasted? Priceless. Sideswipe driving the wrong way for 20 miles? Priceless. It's no wonder Simmons is the way he is. xD
Hope you continue this!
12LucasVNI finished this at last.
Overall, I love your characterization of Simmons. He is an oddball character to say the least, and you made his behavior understandable and believable. And, the situations he had to deal with are hilarious. Taking a real F-16 and modifying it for remote-control flight for Jet Judo practice? Priceless. Simmons getting wasted? Priceless. Sideswipe driving the wrong way for 20 miles? Priceless. It's no wonder Simmons is the way he is. xD
Hope you continue this!
1/5/2012 c21 179Lady Azar de Tameran
A very funny and enjoyable story. It makes me laugh every time. Simmons is both in character but likable. The bots are hilarious, and what one expects from Jazz and the twins especially. The Dinobots were a good choice humor-wise, and I do hope the Wreckers could show up.
It seems like this story is abandoned, but I wish that you'd give it another chance.
179Lady Azar de TameranA very funny and enjoyable story. It makes me laugh every time. Simmons is both in character but likable. The bots are hilarious, and what one expects from Jazz and the twins especially. The Dinobots were a good choice humor-wise, and I do hope the Wreckers could show up.
It seems like this story is abandoned, but I wish that you'd give it another chance.
9/18/2011 c21 12White Aster
I really like your Simmons. He slides right into the team so well...y'know, eventually. I particularly love how he says he's not a people person, yet he's nice to Bluestreak and completely knows and appreciates Red Alert. He may not be a natural, but he can sure fake it. Or maybe he's just sympathetic to the 'freaks'. He's a good guy. :)
12White AsterI really like your Simmons. He slides right into the team so well...y'know, eventually. I particularly love how he says he's not a people person, yet he's nice to Bluestreak and completely knows and appreciates Red Alert. He may not be a natural, but he can sure fake it. Or maybe he's just sympathetic to the 'freaks'. He's a good guy. :)
9/12/2011 c20 Calandre
Possibly in the course of reading this story I might have cracked a few ribs, or it just might not be wise to read at ohh 1 in the morning when the house is asleep.
I love the humor, the situations that Simmons winds up in and how he tries to deal with it.
Grimlock rules.
Prom story: Almost getting arrested because the people in my limo wanted to get some good after prom pics. So we went to a fairly nice, well known park, got into a good picture. The next 6 that the driver took was all of us talking to the nice policeman who wanted to arrest us for trespassing.
Then my entire grad class almost destroyed a Denny's. And yes,cops got involved there too.
Possibly in the course of reading this story I might have cracked a few ribs, or it just might not be wise to read at ohh 1 in the morning when the house is asleep.
I love the humor, the situations that Simmons winds up in and how he tries to deal with it.
Grimlock rules.
Prom story: Almost getting arrested because the people in my limo wanted to get some good after prom pics. So we went to a fairly nice, well known park, got into a good picture. The next 6 that the driver took was all of us talking to the nice policeman who wanted to arrest us for trespassing.
Then my entire grad class almost destroyed a Denny's. And yes,cops got involved there too.