for Love was my Favorite Disease1/20 c9
13BlackCatNeko999
This was one of the best LaviLena stories I read. Great job! Please write more.
I am so happy with the way you ended it. It is good that Lavi fought for himself.
13BlackCatNeko999This was one of the best LaviLena stories I read. Great job! Please write more.
I am so happy with the way you ended it. It is good that Lavi fought for himself.
11/27/2010 c9 janrockiss
Awww the ending was sweet. I thought Lavi died for sure but that was a twist for sure :D
Awww the ending was sweet. I thought Lavi died for sure but that was a twist for sure :D
9/23/2010 c9
10Konoha's White Fang
I just need a moment to pull myself together...
*takes a deep breath*
This story was really touching. I could practically feel how Lavi and Lenalee felt. I very much enjoyed reading this. Your choice of words was amazing and very suitable. You took your leisure time in showing us that Lavi gave up and only wanted to die and emphasized on that on more than one occasion. I truly believed that he was going to die and prepared myself mentally for that.
And the beginning of the last chapter only added to my certainty of his death. But when I read that he was still alive, I was so overwhelmed with emotions that I started crying. Good thing that I have a box of tissues next to me.
I admire those who are able to transmit feelings through words and definitely love their stories.
Kudos for you, you definitely deserve this review.
~KWF~
10Konoha's White FangI just need a moment to pull myself together...
*takes a deep breath*
This story was really touching. I could practically feel how Lavi and Lenalee felt. I very much enjoyed reading this. Your choice of words was amazing and very suitable. You took your leisure time in showing us that Lavi gave up and only wanted to die and emphasized on that on more than one occasion. I truly believed that he was going to die and prepared myself mentally for that.
And the beginning of the last chapter only added to my certainty of his death. But when I read that he was still alive, I was so overwhelmed with emotions that I started crying. Good thing that I have a box of tissues next to me.
I admire those who are able to transmit feelings through words and definitely love their stories.
Kudos for you, you definitely deserve this review.
~KWF~
7/9/2009 c9 German-Neko-chan
Wow!
That story is just so wonderful
I had to cry in the last chapter @-@
Really great!
Wow!
That story is just so wonderful
I had to cry in the last chapter @-@
Really great!
10/30/2008 c9
3Prinzack
Goodness! My heart was about to crack in two as I read from the top, thinking, "Oh no, Lavi died after all!"
But then WOAH, did you surprise me. :D
I love these kinds of surprises~
Lovely fic, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :3
3PrinzackGoodness! My heart was about to crack in two as I read from the top, thinking, "Oh no, Lavi died after all!"
But then WOAH, did you surprise me. :D
I love these kinds of surprises~
Lovely fic, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :3
10/19/2008 c9
5Tiny Otaku
That was a fantastic ending!
I love the memorial thing too! An i loved when lenalee said that thing about there being 134 lilies instead of 135.
All in all, a good story with a GREAT ending!
5Tiny OtakuThat was a fantastic ending!
I love the memorial thing too! An i loved when lenalee said that thing about there being 134 lilies instead of 135.
All in all, a good story with a GREAT ending!
10/17/2008 c9
1Lechu
Beautiful.
In the end, a lovely happy endind. What I've wished for! ^^
Thank you for writing it!
1LechuBeautiful.
In the end, a lovely happy endind. What I've wished for! ^^
Thank you for writing it!
10/17/2008 c9
3Julye
My God, you made me cry. *sob*. I was breathless at first, ugh, and I thought, I thought...uwah..
Thank you very much for the happy ending, and the awesome story. Love it so much!
3JulyeMy God, you made me cry. *sob*. I was breathless at first, ugh, and I thought, I thought...uwah..
Thank you very much for the happy ending, and the awesome story. Love it so much!
10/16/2008 c9
5Akira Johnson
i luved it. when i saw 'Lavi' I was so happy that he survived. :D Great ending :)
5Akira Johnsoni luved it. when i saw 'Lavi' I was so happy that he survived. :D Great ending :)
10/16/2008 c9
17silverfire113
That was beautiful. Simply beautiful. No other words to describe it really.
17silverfire113That was beautiful. Simply beautiful. No other words to describe it really.
