for Return of Namikaze 25/10 c39 ZeroTails321317
love this perfect ending I just wished u kept it up a little longer but that's fine anyway again love this along with the 1st return of namikaze you are my # 1 naruto auther
love this perfect ending I just wished u kept it up a little longer but that's fine anyway again love this along with the 1st return of namikaze you are my # 1 naruto auther
3/11 c23 Someone
i will yell at both ideas
i will yell at both ideas
2/22 c13 
2mmd8280
So you realize, Itachi could also put you in his own world with the Mangekyou Sharingan. Also, from the ice nin being able to get up and speak after it, I got you were implying that they are more powerful than Kakashi who was in a trance and unconcious for weeks.
2mmd8280So you realize, Itachi could also put you in his own world with the Mangekyou Sharingan. Also, from the ice nin being able to get up and speak after it, I got you were implying that they are more powerful than Kakashi who was in a trance and unconcious for weeks.
2/16 c39 guest
Awesome love it
Awesome love it
7/25/2012 c39 Pip-Doodlely-Doo
bro seriously and love and hate you rite now man sniff...sniff... i started cry when i read this ending especially when he talks a lil bit bout his past dude i was done i had to cry. lol ;-; but anyways man great stories dude probably second best for me,grammar it was a rite, but besides all that, flippin great story bro keep it up and send me your next story if you are working on any man! peace
bro seriously and love and hate you rite now man sniff...sniff... i started cry when i read this ending especially when he talks a lil bit bout his past dude i was done i had to cry. lol ;-; but anyways man great stories dude probably second best for me,grammar it was a rite, but besides all that, flippin great story bro keep it up and send me your next story if you are working on any man! peace
4/21/2012 c39 2Gaaraxx33
Best story I have ever read. This was the first fanfiction I read and it is the best. I hate when Naruto dies though. Really sad when you talked about them in Irukas class.
2Gaaraxx33Best story I have ever read. This was the first fanfiction I read and it is the best. I hate when Naruto dies though. Really sad when you talked about them in Irukas class.
4/1/2012 c5 Nethis
u don't feel bad? I started crying at the end of the chapter. And that's saying a lot because I usually only cry when animals die in movies :*( I do like how you can capture a sad moment and make the reader cry. Same goes for the happy moments.
u don't feel bad? I started crying at the end of the chapter. And that's saying a lot because I usually only cry when animals die in movies :*( I do like how you can capture a sad moment and make the reader cry. Same goes for the happy moments.
3/30/2012 c39 10Mathiasosx
I'm... Really not sure what to say... It was incredible... And the ending nearly brought me to tears... You really are a master.
10MathiasosxI'm... Really not sure what to say... It was incredible... And the ending nearly brought me to tears... You really are a master.
2/29/2012 c27 3Evie Glacier Tako
I was going to post typos/mispellings but after 7 I thought I'd pm you with issues by chapter from here on so that you do not have to have everyone see the issues. This chapter was full of them and I hadn't even gotten halfway through it. I liked this chapter though
3Evie Glacier TakoI was going to post typos/mispellings but after 7 I thought I'd pm you with issues by chapter from here on so that you do not have to have everyone see the issues. This chapter was full of them and I hadn't even gotten halfway through it. I liked this chapter though
2/29/2012 c26 Evie Glacier Tako
I thought that even though there were little typos/misspellings in every chapter (or almost every one) that I would point out the funny ones in this chapter (though you have written a lot past this.
"much to her father's announce showing" I think you meant annoyance
"Now are you ready to sever your village as Jounin?" I think you mean serve, because sever would mean something entirely different
"do us all a flavoured asks her out" I am pretty sure you meant "a favor and ask her out" because otherwise the sentence makes no sense.
I am really enjoying the story and thought there are at least one typo/misspelling in every chapter they do not usually detract from the story. Since these are not technically spelled wrong (they are the wrong words) but spell check will tell you they're ok, I just wanted to bring your attention to it (if you have a beta then they missed them) and suggest (even though you probably know this) that before you post you read your chapter out loud (you can catch errors like that and it takes very little time). I am off to read the next chapters and will review with any typos, because I think it's helpful (if you don't then please ignore the reviews).
I thought that even though there were little typos/misspellings in every chapter (or almost every one) that I would point out the funny ones in this chapter (though you have written a lot past this.
"much to her father's announce showing" I think you meant annoyance
"Now are you ready to sever your village as Jounin?" I think you mean serve, because sever would mean something entirely different
"do us all a flavoured asks her out" I am pretty sure you meant "a favor and ask her out" because otherwise the sentence makes no sense.
I am really enjoying the story and thought there are at least one typo/misspelling in every chapter they do not usually detract from the story. Since these are not technically spelled wrong (they are the wrong words) but spell check will tell you they're ok, I just wanted to bring your attention to it (if you have a beta then they missed them) and suggest (even though you probably know this) that before you post you read your chapter out loud (you can catch errors like that and it takes very little time). I am off to read the next chapters and will review with any typos, because I think it's helpful (if you don't then please ignore the reviews).