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3/1/2012 c3 2JudaiLover74
Aww, poor Johann. =( I loved the story so very much. It's sad that Johann had to die like that, especially by his first ( and only ) friend. Even though they knew each other for a short time, I actually believed that they would've been good friends.

R.I.P Johan look-alike. You ARE The bravest person I know.
12/1/2008 c3 Leechan1993
OMG! Johann! No! Now I'm gonna go in the dark conner of my room and cry! I'm gonna turn emo!
11/29/2008 c3 Evil Angel Of The Zerg
Hm...Good ok ttyl ~Jade-san
11/23/2008 c3 No More Fanfiction for Me
Wow, I almost cried. It was so...so...I dunno how to explain it! It was so sad and deep and enchanting...just something you get lost in when you're reading it and when it's over you're like "Huh?" Seriously, you put the reader right into the story. The best term I could use to describe this story would be realistic fantasy. XD Obviously there are a lot of fantasy elements to this fic, but it was SO realistic that it was just chilling. And I found it ironic how Juudai killed the person he'd been trying to protect from the start. And even though Johann wasn't Johan, it was kind of in a sense like he killed the person he loved the most and who he'd been trying to save. The descriptions were so breathtaking and chilling and the characters were PERFECT and it was so canon and I'm so jealous...XD Just absolutely amazing. Great job, Chazzi. You're truly one of the best writers I know. ^^
11/22/2008 c3 53Peach Wookiee
Sad, if very good ending, CLG. I liked this story.
11/22/2008 c3 whoompah
oh my... I seriously just can't find the words for it! this was definitely unexpected, but I love the way you deliver it! I'm actually preety sad now that it's finished ;.; but my mins is still screaming (OMG!) you did such a great job with this one! well done!
11/4/2008 c2 10EnchantedTopaz
i don't think it was pointless, i actually rather enjoyed the whole thing. i didn't like how quickly that blunette stranger was brought in and just as swiftly killed off so i'm glad to read a story by someone who also cares about that boy! ^.^
10/1/2008 c2 17LunarYamiDemon
Yay! A new chappy! ^^ Wow, tis longer than it looks! Sorry for the late review! I read it yesterday but I didn't get a chance to post... -_- Anyways! The chappy was awesome! w Poor Johann...But he's so determined! And apparently apologizes a lot -w- OMG! He met Yubel-Johan! XD Yay! He makes an early appearance! Who knew he was the one laughing insanely! XD Yubel-Johan is watching poor Johann like a hawk...I wonder if Johann's going to see Haou...Looking forward to the next chappy! Hope you update! ^^
9/30/2008 c2 whoompah
aww Johan! he's so adorable here! and how he's blushing, definitely cute. :3 I love this chapter! you never dissapoint me! I want more! 8D
9/29/2008 c2 53Peach Wookiee
I thought it was pretty good, actually, CLG. I like your interpretation. I'm sorry it took a bit to review, but the notification didn't get to me until today.
9/29/2008 c2 15AxJfan
*glomps you*

You're back with this story! Yay!

Like I've said before in "Mirrors" (I think) you're writing is still amazing as ever and this is very well-written! I'm looking forward to seeing the conclusion of this 3-shot!

AxJfan
9/29/2008 c2 Leechan1993
I love this. Youre the first person how actuly boder to write about that guy how looks like Johan xD! I was a Great idea. Plz udapte soon
9/28/2008 c2 Angel Duelist 153
*sighs* It ate my review. Luckily I had it saved. Here's the full thing, if it doesn't eat it AGAIN.

Man, your writing makes it look like you wrote the storyline for the show! O.o I'm not even kidding. XD It's that awesome. You had their characters perfect.
9/28/2008 c2 No More Fanfiction for Me
Man, your writing makes it look like you wrote the storyline for the show! O.o I'm not even kidding. XD It's that awesome. You had their characters perfect.
9/7/2008 c1 4SassyOMG2282
Awesome! This is so cool! :D

Update when you can please!

-Sassy
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