for Bad Egg4/21 c12 Katana Naginata
Continue!The Storys Awsome,Thanks For It By The Way And As I Said Please Continue!
Thanx .
Continue!The Storys Awsome,Thanks For It By The Way And As I Said Please Continue!
Thanx .
3/23 c12 Kuma Kitsumie
God dam it all why
God dam it all why
10/18/2012 c12 Guest
update :c
update :c
10/5/2012 c12 Staramu
Really cool fanfic I want more ! • :)
Please do the next chapter hay could amu chaciter transform with dia in front of the gardeins and reck havouk by getting x eggs cause reason 1 love to c look on their faces and reason 2 I think they need to be in it a little more but great fanfic all around :p
Really cool fanfic I want more ! • :)
Please do the next chapter hay could amu chaciter transform with dia in front of the gardeins and reck havouk by getting x eggs cause reason 1 love to c look on their faces and reason 2 I think they need to be in it a little more but great fanfic all around :p
9/24/2012 c12 RinRin-Chama
I LOVE this fic so much! though, I'm kinda sad it hasn't been updated in a while, but thank you for writing what you have already, It's still great I don't want amu to change back though, she's soooooo much better like this There should be more fics like this one v.v :)
I LOVE this fic so much! though, I'm kinda sad it hasn't been updated in a while, but thank you for writing what you have already, It's still great I don't want amu to change back though, she's soooooo much better like this There should be more fics like this one v.v :)
7/10/2012 c9 
3nekokuro13
Uh... an original character... Sila... didn't see that coming.
Lol, wow, sugar rush. That's a jaw-dropping sight (pardon the pun)
Well, will see where this leads to... hmm...
Oh, wow, 150th review.
3nekokuro13Uh... an original character... Sila... didn't see that coming.
Lol, wow, sugar rush. That's a jaw-dropping sight (pardon the pun)
Well, will see where this leads to... hmm...
Oh, wow, 150th review.
7/10/2012 c8 nekokuro13
Deidara? Lol, why does a blonde named Deidara sound familiar... :P And it's an artist! XD And you seem to make them all some kind of chibi-crossovered-characters. Nope, not complaining.
Clay ants... how can anyone make that?
Eh? It's over? No, I mean... I reached the end of the page without knowing it! No, not so very long, but considering the audience... Works!
Deidara? Lol, why does a blonde named Deidara sound familiar... :P And it's an artist! XD And you seem to make them all some kind of chibi-crossovered-characters. Nope, not complaining.
Clay ants... how can anyone make that?
Eh? It's over? No, I mean... I reached the end of the page without knowing it! No, not so very long, but considering the audience... Works!
7/8/2012 c7 nekokuro13
Ah, so this is quite a short chapter. Something like the transition kind. Things are developing.
Sigh,poll closed, huh? I was thinking of the X Chara, but... will see if I'm on the winning side later.
Ah, so this is quite a short chapter. Something like the transition kind. Things are developing.
Sigh,poll closed, huh? I was thinking of the X Chara, but... will see if I'm on the winning side later.
7/4/2012 c6 nekokuro13
Pie... classic.
Uh... floating... yeah, anime logic. School life, anime-wise, of course. So things are developing... we'll see where this carries us.
Pie... classic.
Uh... floating... yeah, anime logic. School life, anime-wise, of course. So things are developing... we'll see where this carries us.
6/30/2012 c5 nekokuro13
Lol, you really got a way to explain the desu extinction, huh? Referral to self as third person... works!
Some little lively discussions... and a plan. Well, knowing you, it will definitely live up to this series' uh... style.
Still, the voice of your characters are somehow fitting. Except for the two or three usage of some mature words.
Lol, you really got a way to explain the desu extinction, huh? Referral to self as third person... works!
Some little lively discussions... and a plan. Well, knowing you, it will definitely live up to this series' uh... style.
Still, the voice of your characters are somehow fitting. Except for the two or three usage of some mature words.
6/30/2012 c4 nekokuro13
Well, and there we have the battle scene.
Lol'd at that last bit. You're economic (maybe too economic) with the details, but it reads really fast and light.
Well, and there we have the battle scene.
Lol'd at that last bit. You're economic (maybe too economic) with the details, but it reads really fast and light.
6/30/2012 c3 nekokuro13
A lively chapter indeed.
Ouch, pie.
Twists abound again.
And... a cliffhanger. Your writing seems better now I've got the hang of it, or was it you improving?
Hmm, they probably dismiss the missing desu as being lost in translation? Uh... doesn't sound like a valid excuse.
A lively chapter indeed.
Ouch, pie.
Twists abound again.
And... a cliffhanger. Your writing seems better now I've got the hang of it, or was it you improving?
Hmm, they probably dismiss the missing desu as being lost in translation? Uh... doesn't sound like a valid excuse.
6/26/2012 c2 nekokuro13
Hmm, forgetting to give the most talkative character lines is a crime. :P
Your pace of writing really flows, it's like reading a manga or watching an anime itself. I practically scrolled down while reading your story/ies, reading vertically instead of along the lines.
And so I can guess how you raked in 140 reviews. :P
Hmm, forgetting to give the most talkative character lines is a crime. :P
Your pace of writing really flows, it's like reading a manga or watching an anime itself. I practically scrolled down while reading your story/ies, reading vertically instead of along the lines.
And so I can guess how you raked in 140 reviews. :P