for What if12/15/2011 c2 Reader
When are YOU going to continu the story?
When are YOU going to continu the story?
11/24/2010 c2 privatepixie0208
i hope you can update more because the story is really interesting... i've been thinking what will happen next... pls update more... :D
i hope you can update more because the story is really interesting... i've been thinking what will happen next... pls update more... :D
8/18/2009 c2 hulkishpower
this is so awesome! i wish i could read more~ "whine" can you puhlease write more chapters? i really would lurve you ir you did that. i really like the way you made sasuke so innocent and how naruto is so full of life and happiness of life that he doesnt have in the real story! it really shows off the wonderful power of fanfics and imagination! please write more, i would really appreciate the extra reading. this story is great!
this is so awesome! i wish i could read more~ "whine" can you puhlease write more chapters? i really would lurve you ir you did that. i really like the way you made sasuke so innocent and how naruto is so full of life and happiness of life that he doesnt have in the real story! it really shows off the wonderful power of fanfics and imagination! please write more, i would really appreciate the extra reading. this story is great!
4/5/2009 c2 
1Phblood
Heya man! Nice! Why don't you keeps up writing it? It's too good to stop... Could make a nice full fic... And the Namikazes are really strange... Asaki creeps me out... Anyways, think about making a full story!
1PhbloodHeya man! Nice! Why don't you keeps up writing it? It's too good to stop... Could make a nice full fic... And the Namikazes are really strange... Asaki creeps me out... Anyways, think about making a full story!
12/16/2008 c2 14XxXxFading DreamxXxX
aww... Kawaii!
that was really cute, the Namikaze family is strange.
this was really well written but there were a few mistakes. apart from some spelling and grammar mistakes it was a really good story. I loved it.
hehe, Naruto is so dense it's funny.
14XxXxFading DreamxXxXaww... Kawaii!
that was really cute, the Namikaze family is strange.
this was really well written but there were a few mistakes. apart from some spelling and grammar mistakes it was a really good story. I loved it.
hehe, Naruto is so dense it's funny.
9/3/2008 c1 1Sentimental Pleasure
Cool... and honestly speaking (or rather typing), the storyline is so damn funny that a joker would resign it's position as the king's laughing toy. ( okay, that's an overstatement...) but enough with the praises. And I kind of pity with Hinata with her current problem, and also I think that she should better stick with loving her crush and also do something to attract his feeling in a long run rather than she changes her heart easily and turn all heel to Kiba, (No offence, I don't hate him, rather it's the other way because of his ferocity) although in the end she may do. (read there, "may").
1Sentimental PleasureCool... and honestly speaking (or rather typing), the storyline is so damn funny that a joker would resign it's position as the king's laughing toy. ( okay, that's an overstatement...) but enough with the praises. And I kind of pity with Hinata with her current problem, and also I think that she should better stick with loving her crush and also do something to attract his feeling in a long run rather than she changes her heart easily and turn all heel to Kiba, (No offence, I don't hate him, rather it's the other way because of his ferocity) although in the end she may do. (read there, "may").