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20Katea-Nui
I think I've commented before but I would REALLY love to see more of this! And see the Sides and Jazz smexins. And for Jazz to realize OMG he's being manipulated too! And (if you've got them as twins) to see people find out they're twins. Although why are they so mean to each other? It breaks my heart! Great story!
20Katea-NuiI think I've commented before but I would REALLY love to see more of this! And see the Sides and Jazz smexins. And for Jazz to realize OMG he's being manipulated too! And (if you've got them as twins) to see people find out they're twins. Although why are they so mean to each other? It breaks my heart! Great story!
8/9/2012 c11 Katea-Nui
Ahhh! Please don't end it there! It was getting really good and really engaging and I just GOTTA find out what's up with the Twins!
Ahhh! Please don't end it there! It was getting really good and really engaging and I just GOTTA find out what's up with the Twins!
5/15/2012 c11 7VaRa129
This is really good! I would love for you to continue! Im curious as to what the, not so twins and the moment, twins. Did something happen between them that made Sideswipe's nek cables sensitive or is it just like a tick?
All chapters were amazingly done. Are you planning on continuing? I hope you do!
7VaRa129This is really good! I would love for you to continue! Im curious as to what the, not so twins and the moment, twins. Did something happen between them that made Sideswipe's nek cables sensitive or is it just like a tick?
All chapters were amazingly done. Are you planning on continuing? I hope you do!
2/25/2012 c11 Qwertzu
I fraggin´ love every chapter of this story! Ya gonna finish it, right? Pretty please with an energon goodie on top? *big dim photovoltaic puppy optics*
I fraggin´ love every chapter of this story! Ya gonna finish it, right? Pretty please with an energon goodie on top? *big dim photovoltaic puppy optics*
1/18/2011 c11 Daklog73
I'm pretty sure I read this some where else, I remember being upset that it hasn't been updated for a while.
This is a GOOD story, it's a shame to let it go unfinished.
The whole Sides and Sunny story is interesting, I like how you have them hating each other, typical brothers. And that no one knows is pretty neat as well.
Ratch and Prowl being bonded was a shock, I've never seen them as a couple, nor Wheeljack and 'Hide. It's nice to see the change up from the usual.
I love how this relationship with Jazz and Sides is coming about, nice and slow. I really like it.
Please, I beg you for an update. I know it's been like forever, but this is a GOOD story and it deserves to be finished. Have a heart, don't let your readers down. It's always a shame to see the good ones go unfinished, it happens way too often.
I'm pretty sure I read this some where else, I remember being upset that it hasn't been updated for a while.
This is a GOOD story, it's a shame to let it go unfinished.
The whole Sides and Sunny story is interesting, I like how you have them hating each other, typical brothers. And that no one knows is pretty neat as well.
Ratch and Prowl being bonded was a shock, I've never seen them as a couple, nor Wheeljack and 'Hide. It's nice to see the change up from the usual.
I love how this relationship with Jazz and Sides is coming about, nice and slow. I really like it.
Please, I beg you for an update. I know it's been like forever, but this is a GOOD story and it deserves to be finished. Have a heart, don't let your readers down. It's always a shame to see the good ones go unfinished, it happens way too often.
8/23/2010 c11 7Pikaseel
I love the fact that Jazz'll sleep with practically any mech/femme. It makes me giggle.
And oh snap! Jazz & Prowl exchanged a data chit earlier! :0
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7PikaseelI love the fact that Jazz'll sleep with practically any mech/femme. It makes me giggle.
And oh snap! Jazz & Prowl exchanged a data chit earlier! :0
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
12/22/2009 c11 57Uniasus
*huffs* Well, i'm a little disappointed to see its been so long since you updated.
Out of all the relationships you've mentioned, I find the one between Sunny and Sides most fascinating, I think because i've never seen it displayed like this before.
Update as a holiday gift?
57Uniasus*huffs* Well, i'm a little disappointed to see its been so long since you updated.
Out of all the relationships you've mentioned, I find the one between Sunny and Sides most fascinating, I think because i've never seen it displayed like this before.
Update as a holiday gift?
7/12/2009 c11 10FloofWolfe
It just occurred to me that when Jazz got worried about 'Bee being glitched by Soundwave, he mentions not having seen SW himself... when he so totally did. Yet he doesn't seem aware of the lie. And those bits of odd, anti-Autobot thinking he's having... So the plot thickens.
10FloofWolfeIt just occurred to me that when Jazz got worried about 'Bee being glitched by Soundwave, he mentions not having seen SW himself... when he so totally did. Yet he doesn't seem aware of the lie. And those bits of odd, anti-Autobot thinking he's having... So the plot thickens.
7/5/2009 c11 Philadelphiacheese
Aw this is really got me intrested ^_^ Its really really cute i hope you continue to write this i look forward to reading more :)
Aw this is really got me intrested ^_^ Its really really cute i hope you continue to write this i look forward to reading more :)
6/30/2009 c8 21Mirage Shinkiro
Very intrguing and well done. I hope your schedule permits you time to update soon.
21Mirage ShinkiroVery intrguing and well done. I hope your schedule permits you time to update soon.
6/11/2009 c11 14Tiamat1972
I just love that scene. Jazz dragging Sideswipe along by his horns. Thanks for including it.
*poke* I want to see some Lambo cuddles soon. I'll settle for Sunstreaker and a mirror if I have to. ;D
14Tiamat1972I just love that scene. Jazz dragging Sideswipe along by his horns. Thanks for including it.
*poke* I want to see some Lambo cuddles soon. I'll settle for Sunstreaker and a mirror if I have to. ;D
6/1/2009 c11 4Paleodex
Mwuahaha, new strategy, I'm writing this review as I go along.
First off: There is no fragging way that Evacuation Routes datapad is just coincidence. No way. Someone's been in Jazz's office, and he touched that pad. Now, who would have grease on their hands?
Love the conversation about Prowl and Ratchet's...questionable activities, and the location of said activities. Too funny!
Definitely something fishy about Prowl thinking he'd offlined on his own. Either that, or he trusts Ratchet a heck of a lot, and Ratchet's not exactly worthy of that trust. I prefer the first option. Is the virus screwing with him? Trouble between the bonded?
In the rec room, Jazz's close proximity setting Sideswipe on edge? That why he's balling his fist up?
And holy crap, how has Jazz not noticed that there's something weird going on between Sunny and Sides? Can he not notice that Sideswipe gets weird whenever Sunstreaker's mentioned? Overly defensive, randomly changing the subject, I mean, Primus! Jazz sure is being thick!
Fight with Vitran: Sideswipe's battle protocols overriding everything else? Optics go white when he gets into a hostile situation, when Jazz tells him to stop, they go to a pale blue instead of white. Am I close?
Is it a coincidence that Sunstreaker was near the rec room, or did he start moving in that direction when he felt Sideswipe getting riled up? Faked nonchalance but was actually there to check up on his brother?
Ho hum. Now thinking about Sides talking to Jazz in the brig. Is it just normal anger at not being defended by his friend, or, has he really ever only had one goof bud in the world (Sunny) and has only that to base all relationships off of, thus believing that Jazz is going to treat him with the same loyalty Sunstreaker would? I'm probably reading way, way to much into this.
I love Array, she's so cute and quippy!
Wah! Ironhide! Holy smokes!
Okay, so...sorry about the horribly disjointed review. I've probably read between lines that weren't even there in the first place, trying to figure out if there's any clue to what's happening behind the scenes. Again, fantastic chapter. Loved the bit in the rec room, both Jazz's convo with Sides and the fight w/ Vitran. Good luck with Starcrossed, and this, and Three Small Words!
4PaleodexMwuahaha, new strategy, I'm writing this review as I go along.
First off: There is no fragging way that Evacuation Routes datapad is just coincidence. No way. Someone's been in Jazz's office, and he touched that pad. Now, who would have grease on their hands?
Love the conversation about Prowl and Ratchet's...questionable activities, and the location of said activities. Too funny!
Definitely something fishy about Prowl thinking he'd offlined on his own. Either that, or he trusts Ratchet a heck of a lot, and Ratchet's not exactly worthy of that trust. I prefer the first option. Is the virus screwing with him? Trouble between the bonded?
In the rec room, Jazz's close proximity setting Sideswipe on edge? That why he's balling his fist up?
And holy crap, how has Jazz not noticed that there's something weird going on between Sunny and Sides? Can he not notice that Sideswipe gets weird whenever Sunstreaker's mentioned? Overly defensive, randomly changing the subject, I mean, Primus! Jazz sure is being thick!
Fight with Vitran: Sideswipe's battle protocols overriding everything else? Optics go white when he gets into a hostile situation, when Jazz tells him to stop, they go to a pale blue instead of white. Am I close?
Is it a coincidence that Sunstreaker was near the rec room, or did he start moving in that direction when he felt Sideswipe getting riled up? Faked nonchalance but was actually there to check up on his brother?
Ho hum. Now thinking about Sides talking to Jazz in the brig. Is it just normal anger at not being defended by his friend, or, has he really ever only had one goof bud in the world (Sunny) and has only that to base all relationships off of, thus believing that Jazz is going to treat him with the same loyalty Sunstreaker would? I'm probably reading way, way to much into this.
I love Array, she's so cute and quippy!
Wah! Ironhide! Holy smokes!
Okay, so...sorry about the horribly disjointed review. I've probably read between lines that weren't even there in the first place, trying to figure out if there's any clue to what's happening behind the scenes. Again, fantastic chapter. Loved the bit in the rec room, both Jazz's convo with Sides and the fight w/ Vitran. Good luck with Starcrossed, and this, and Three Small Words!
6/1/2009 c11 20flamingmarsh
yay you updated!
and this was really great!
glad Bumblebee is beter!
and OH NO! I hope they'll get to Ironhide and the rest to help them out. I hope nothing bad happens
20flamingmarshyay you updated!
and this was really great!
glad Bumblebee is beter!
and OH NO! I hope they'll get to Ironhide and the rest to help them out. I hope nothing bad happens
6/1/2009 c11 CuteKittten
Nice story.
Just a quick question. Does Jazz or anybody on base know that Sides and Sunny are twins?
Nice story.
Just a quick question. Does Jazz or anybody on base know that Sides and Sunny are twins?