for Altered Realites6/20/2009 c5 aliasjems
Really enjoyed this :D Glad to hear there is a sequel :D
Really enjoyed this :D Glad to hear there is a sequel :D
6/20/2009 c1 aliasjems
What an interesting idea.
I am already enjoying this story. It is well written and manages to keep the characters and their relationship somewhat real even though things are different.
I'm interested to see where you take this so I'll certainly be continuing.
What an interesting idea.
I am already enjoying this story. It is well written and manages to keep the characters and their relationship somewhat real even though things are different.
I'm interested to see where you take this so I'll certainly be continuing.
5/4/2009 c5 unequivocal
What an interesting concept! It's almost surreal the way Booth and Brennan interact in this piece... you have a knack for keeping them in character even when the situations are so different than canon. The awkwardness of a criminal and a lawman collaborating - of their own volition, no less - shines through, yet the odd comfort of Brennan and Booth's relationship provides a jarring dichotomy as the base.
I can't wait to read the sequel; the development of this unstable arrangement and resolution will surely be an interesting time. Thank you for sharing!
What an interesting concept! It's almost surreal the way Booth and Brennan interact in this piece... you have a knack for keeping them in character even when the situations are so different than canon. The awkwardness of a criminal and a lawman collaborating - of their own volition, no less - shines through, yet the odd comfort of Brennan and Booth's relationship provides a jarring dichotomy as the base.
I can't wait to read the sequel; the development of this unstable arrangement and resolution will surely be an interesting time. Thank you for sharing!
11/30/2008 c5 MickeyBoggs
I really enjoyed this story. Having Brennan as a criminal is not something I'd ever have thought of but I like the way you developed it. Will be interesting to see if you can somehow manage to let her use her love of bones be useful in the sequel - which I eagerly await!
I really enjoyed this story. Having Brennan as a criminal is not something I'd ever have thought of but I like the way you developed it. Will be interesting to see if you can somehow manage to let her use her love of bones be useful in the sequel - which I eagerly await!
10/6/2008 c9 
13Glissoning Raven
I loved every bit of it. I am glad there is going to be a sequel because the story seems a bit unfinished otherwise. I will be keeping an eye out for the next story! Please try to post it ASAP!
Raven
13Glissoning RavenI loved every bit of it. I am glad there is going to be a sequel because the story seems a bit unfinished otherwise. I will be keeping an eye out for the next story! Please try to post it ASAP!
Raven
10/5/2008 c9 1fan-of-fans
great story! will we see the criminal tempe turn into docter brennen? will she be an official squint?
1fan-of-fansgreat story! will we see the criminal tempe turn into docter brennen? will she be an official squint?
10/1/2008 c9 Ash211230
I really loved your story. It was interesting to see what it would be like for Brennan to be a thief. I'm glad Booth didn't arrest her. I can't wait for the sequal. I hope if Hodgins ever does find out that she was the one who broke in that he'll forgive her especially if she gives the statue back. I hope you'll be able to get it posted soon.
'Til then see ya,
~ Ash
I really loved your story. It was interesting to see what it would be like for Brennan to be a thief. I'm glad Booth didn't arrest her. I can't wait for the sequal. I hope if Hodgins ever does find out that she was the one who broke in that he'll forgive her especially if she gives the statue back. I hope you'll be able to get it posted soon.
'Til then see ya,
~ Ash
10/1/2008 c9 mendenbar
I agree, Gum is a wonderful author. But you have done a very good job on this alternate universe story. Don't worry if the series comes up with things that don't match your story. The present never invalidates the conclusion of the past, merely obfuscates them. Looking forward to your next piece.
I agree, Gum is a wonderful author. But you have done a very good job on this alternate universe story. Don't worry if the series comes up with things that don't match your story. The present never invalidates the conclusion of the past, merely obfuscates them. Looking forward to your next piece.
10/1/2008 c9 doresz
I didn't expect it to end so soon, but I'm glad you'll write a sequel. Good story, I enjoyed it. Thank you!
I didn't expect it to end so soon, but I'm glad you'll write a sequel. Good story, I enjoyed it. Thank you!
9/25/2008 c5 3CompetiveSwimmaChick
You are doing realy really good. I am totally in love with this story. Some more BB stuff would be fun - take them somewhere different for a change maybe? Jazz up the scenery? And what about hodgins vase... there has to be something lurking here. Those are just some out of the blue suggestions. Don't worry about offending me - cause no matter what you do i will be in love with this story.
Update soon! Can't wait for more!
CSC
3CompetiveSwimmaChickYou are doing realy really good. I am totally in love with this story. Some more BB stuff would be fun - take them somewhere different for a change maybe? Jazz up the scenery? And what about hodgins vase... there has to be something lurking here. Those are just some out of the blue suggestions. Don't worry about offending me - cause no matter what you do i will be in love with this story.
Update soon! Can't wait for more!
CSC
9/23/2008 c8 manon93
O sorry I didn't see there was another chapter, thank god they're not hurt.
Xx Manon
O sorry I didn't see there was another chapter, thank god they're not hurt.
Xx Manon