for I dare you to move9/24/2008 c1 
93Lara-Van
Wait... that's it? You're absolutely SURE there's no second chapter?
I liked it, but some of what was going on wasn't terribly clear. Like, I kind of got what was going on, but things were kind of murky. If you got a beta reader, it might clear the problem up.
93Lara-VanWait... that's it? You're absolutely SURE there's no second chapter?
I liked it, but some of what was going on wasn't terribly clear. Like, I kind of got what was going on, but things were kind of murky. If you got a beta reader, it might clear the problem up.
9/22/2008 c1 2Shadow Riders
Aw. I like this, its cute. I was actually thinking of writing a story a bit similar to this one but oh well. I think its great that you have got amazing Clois interaction and Chlo-Lo. I can't wait to read your other stories.
2Shadow RidersAw. I like this, its cute. I was actually thinking of writing a story a bit similar to this one but oh well. I think its great that you have got amazing Clois interaction and Chlo-Lo. I can't wait to read your other stories.