for Completion1/12/2012 c1 none yet
If you ever take this up again, I have the feeling that this will be an excellent story.
If you ever take this up again, I have the feeling that this will be an excellent story.
1/24/2009 c1 
1Foxluna
damn u hav to hav alot more chapters for this story please please please please PLEASE!
1Foxlunadamn u hav to hav alot more chapters for this story please please please please PLEASE!
11/16/2008 c1 56Sesshy's Mistress
WOW! Damn and here I am wanting u to update Through a childs eyes :O *goes slack jawed* damn I want to know what happens with this one now hm, could you update this one please? You make the best teasers and cliffy's of anyone I have ever seen until next time :)
56Sesshy's MistressWOW! Damn and here I am wanting u to update Through a childs eyes :O *goes slack jawed* damn I want to know what happens with this one now hm, could you update this one please? You make the best teasers and cliffy's of anyone I have ever seen until next time :)
10/2/2008 c1 5Serenity Moon2
This story seems like it would be a really interesting one to continue with. What I would like to know is what Voldemort wants with Serena.
5Serenity Moon2This story seems like it would be a really interesting one to continue with. What I would like to know is what Voldemort wants with Serena.
9/30/2008 c1 14unspoiled rini
x.x *trimbles from the awsomeness* please please please think of a plot soon. normally i'm not a harry/serena shipper but this fic has me intriged.
14unspoiled rinix.x *trimbles from the awsomeness* please please please think of a plot soon. normally i'm not a harry/serena shipper but this fic has me intriged.
9/29/2008 c1 6RiverSong DreamShadow
Wow- this has the potential to be really good! I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll take it... As of right now, everything is flowing together pretty well; you're drawing a nice visual picture for the reader. The mood is pretty dark, and I'm looking forward to seeing if you'll carry that throughout the rest of the fic. In other words, I can't wait to read more!
6RiverSong DreamShadowWow- this has the potential to be really good! I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll take it... As of right now, everything is flowing together pretty well; you're drawing a nice visual picture for the reader. The mood is pretty dark, and I'm looking forward to seeing if you'll carry that throughout the rest of the fic. In other words, I can't wait to read more!
9/26/2008 c1 SUZITROUBLE
I am really scared for Serena for what she went through. I hope Harry can rescue her and take her to Dumadore fast so she can join the Order of the Phoenix.
I am really scared for Serena for what she went through. I hope Harry can rescue her and take her to Dumadore fast so she can join the Order of the Phoenix.
9/26/2008 c1 9Queen Hotaru
Oh. If that's the teaser? There is A LOT you could do with this! Oh I can't wait. =D Please continue this!
9Queen HotaruOh. If that's the teaser? There is A LOT you could do with this! Oh I can't wait. =D Please continue this!
9/25/2008 c1 Usa
I wish that you would finish Through a Child's Eyes before starting a new fic.. I've been reading your works for years and I've noticed that every time you start something new you forget about your last story and leave it unfinished. Not to sound harsh but is it because you get bored or you don't know how to finish stories? I really wish and beg that you continue with Through a Child's Eyes and don't forget about the people that stuck with you reading and reviewing that fic for the past four years. The people that have left you over a thousand reviews full of encouragement and praise before you go and start another story and leave it on the back burner. Also what is going to happen with Saiyajin no oujo?
I wish that you would finish Through a Child's Eyes before starting a new fic.. I've been reading your works for years and I've noticed that every time you start something new you forget about your last story and leave it unfinished. Not to sound harsh but is it because you get bored or you don't know how to finish stories? I really wish and beg that you continue with Through a Child's Eyes and don't forget about the people that stuck with you reading and reviewing that fic for the past four years. The people that have left you over a thousand reviews full of encouragement and praise before you go and start another story and leave it on the back burner. Also what is going to happen with Saiyajin no oujo?
9/25/2008 c1 6ChibiSilverShadow
I thought this chapter was very interesting. I am very interested to see where this goes and I can't wait to see another chapter. When you can update this story or any of your others when you can. I always look forward to new updates. I think you have a great story on your hands. They are always unique and different which is what I love about them. Keep up the great work! ~erika~
6ChibiSilverShadowI thought this chapter was very interesting. I am very interested to see where this goes and I can't wait to see another chapter. When you can update this story or any of your others when you can. I always look forward to new updates. I think you have a great story on your hands. They are always unique and different which is what I love about them. Keep up the great work! ~erika~
9/24/2008 c1 6Moony92
Very rarely am I ever interested in SM/HP crossover stories; too often are they copouts and cliche's. But this is an exception because it is neither of those things. I must applaud you for this riveting first chapter, it really is a teaser. You've added such addictive suspence, I'm a tad dissapointed that I have to wait a few months before another update. But it's worth it!
I particularly love the dream sequence nearing the end, and the closing line was perfect. The whole thing gave off a sense of distrubing sensuality. I enjoyed reading it so much simply for the fact that it was told so well. :) I look forward to what the next chapter will reveal.
Great work!
6Moony92Very rarely am I ever interested in SM/HP crossover stories; too often are they copouts and cliche's. But this is an exception because it is neither of those things. I must applaud you for this riveting first chapter, it really is a teaser. You've added such addictive suspence, I'm a tad dissapointed that I have to wait a few months before another update. But it's worth it!
I particularly love the dream sequence nearing the end, and the closing line was perfect. The whole thing gave off a sense of distrubing sensuality. I enjoyed reading it so much simply for the fact that it was told so well. :) I look forward to what the next chapter will reveal.
Great work!
9/24/2008 c1 2bebepantheon
wow, this is definately different! Haven't heard from you! and suddenly you just updated or rather upload another story.
Btw, will you be continuiing with 'Through her eyes'? I absolutely love the story, cn't wait for the next chapter!
2bebepantheonwow, this is definately different! Haven't heard from you! and suddenly you just updated or rather upload another story.
Btw, will you be continuiing with 'Through her eyes'? I absolutely love the story, cn't wait for the next chapter!