for Star Trek: Combat Evolved11/2/2011 c3 Guest
I meen it where the ** are they? Did they all drop dead from spontanious combustion! Major Plot hole.
I meen it where the ** are they? Did they all drop dead from spontanious combustion! Major Plot hole.
11/2/2011 c2 Guest
You kind of made the elites seem like boyscouts especially the sword. It took me ten tries to take on a shipmaster with an energysword on heroic. Those guys squashed him in like ten seconds.
You kind of made the elites seem like boyscouts especially the sword. It took me ten tries to take on a shipmaster with an energysword on heroic. Those guys squashed him in like ten seconds.
10/5/2011 c1 Guest
Am I the only one missing this! What happend to the other spartans? They were on the gettysburg too!
Am I the only one missing this! What happend to the other spartans? They were on the gettysburg too!
8/24/2011 c6 Wolfman-053
Wait, when did General Martok (and either IKS Rotarran or IKS Ghorgh'ju) show up?
Wait, when did General Martok (and either IKS Rotarran or IKS Ghorgh'ju) show up?
10/28/2010 c2 
1Tony Branco
Ok...first off the Federation would take their sweet ** time debating if aiding another Earth in another universe was disobeying the Prime Directive. If you do not know what the Prime Directive is...look it up it's there :D. And Jean Luc would not be so over eager to offer Military assistance to someone he had just met (And to fight an enemy unknown to the Federation.) The Federation in all likely hood would NOT help them unless the covenant attacked the Federation by comming out of the rip between dimensions and starting firing on Earth and or Federation vessels.
1Tony BrancoOk...first off the Federation would take their sweet ** time debating if aiding another Earth in another universe was disobeying the Prime Directive. If you do not know what the Prime Directive is...look it up it's there :D. And Jean Luc would not be so over eager to offer Military assistance to someone he had just met (And to fight an enemy unknown to the Federation.) The Federation in all likely hood would NOT help them unless the covenant attacked the Federation by comming out of the rip between dimensions and starting firing on Earth and or Federation vessels.
10/25/2010 c2 halo nut
have arbiter show up.
have arbiter show up.
8/10/2010 c1 12naruhina pwns
interesting fic. good idea as well. There are only a few minor problems.
1. The story is a little rushed
2. While it is in the prime directive that the federation does not interfere in others conflicts, they would fight if the covenat threatened the federation and if I know the covenant, sooner or later they would be a threat to the federation. The covenant are a nomadic sect after all so it would be reasonable to assume that sooner or later they would discover the federation.
3. be a bit more descriptive and show the federation as the more cautious government that they are.
12naruhina pwnsinteresting fic. good idea as well. There are only a few minor problems.
1. The story is a little rushed
2. While it is in the prime directive that the federation does not interfere in others conflicts, they would fight if the covenat threatened the federation and if I know the covenant, sooner or later they would be a threat to the federation. The covenant are a nomadic sect after all so it would be reasonable to assume that sooner or later they would discover the federation.
3. be a bit more descriptive and show the federation as the more cautious government that they are.
7/25/2009 c2 11general MB
I can't read anymore, while you have a grasp of halo cannon, your Star Trek knowledge seems to be restricted to Elite Force II. I'm not sure if you're even a trekkie, otherwise you'd know that starfleet would NEVER send a fleet to interfear in a conflict between two unknown races, as such is a violation of the prime directive. Rendering this story complelty moot!
11general MBI can't read anymore, while you have a grasp of halo cannon, your Star Trek knowledge seems to be restricted to Elite Force II. I'm not sure if you're even a trekkie, otherwise you'd know that starfleet would NEVER send a fleet to interfear in a conflict between two unknown races, as such is a violation of the prime directive. Rendering this story complelty moot!
7/5/2009 c1 23Ben Griggs
Listen to me I will only say this once, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY PLEASE I will not tolerate any cursing on my stories. If you don't like them and have nothing constructive to say STOP READING AND DON'T REVIEW!
23Ben GriggsListen to me I will only say this once, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY PLEASE I will not tolerate any cursing on my stories. If you don't like them and have nothing constructive to say STOP READING AND DON'T REVIEW!
7/4/2009 c2 I FUCK ur mom daily D
Dear god, this fic sucks. I thought It would be a good crossover but instead I find this aberration to humanity. The story progresses too fast, It has a shitload of plotholes. Damn! stop writting ** like this.
Dear god, this fic sucks. I thought It would be a good crossover but instead I find this aberration to humanity. The story progresses too fast, It has a shitload of plotholes. Damn! stop writting ** like this.
5/10/2009 c1 14RahXephon
Your habit of making frequent sequels from stories that are too short to even be called novella's is extremely annoying and simply user-unfriendly. A typical fantasy and sci-fi book contains at least 150 thousand words. Don't make unnecessary sequels designed to artificially increase your exposure until you get at least over a 100 thousand words.
14RahXephonYour habit of making frequent sequels from stories that are too short to even be called novella's is extremely annoying and simply user-unfriendly. A typical fantasy and sci-fi book contains at least 150 thousand words. Don't make unnecessary sequels designed to artificially increase your exposure until you get at least over a 100 thousand words.
4/23/2009 c2 Trife
It started off good though it seems way to rushed you don't really have any details on the fighting or conversations being held on important matters such as the admiral's meeting with the chief. The fleet assembled boding troops to board the ships and other slimier things. Over all I think you needed more details and information on whats going on. Also this is in no way meant to be a flame but what you need to improve on.
Trife
It started off good though it seems way to rushed you don't really have any details on the fighting or conversations being held on important matters such as the admiral's meeting with the chief. The fleet assembled boding troops to board the ships and other slimier things. Over all I think you needed more details and information on whats going on. Also this is in no way meant to be a flame but what you need to improve on.
Trife