for Phantoms of the Heart3/16/2011 c1 G
This is great, it really describes the last months of their marriage well and I liked the ending. :)
This is great, it really describes the last months of their marriage well and I liked the ending. :)
6/11/2009 c1 
4genevevewrites
What a beautiful poem!
I read it three times, crying all the while. Such ...poetic, for lack of a better word, use of words.
I'm going to go read it again. :D
4genevevewritesWhat a beautiful poem!
I read it three times, crying all the while. Such ...poetic, for lack of a better word, use of words.
I'm going to go read it again. :D
10/5/2008 c1 4Claire Hayasaka
Goodness, for a person not fond of poetry, you sure write good poetry!=)
I want to read stuff you are fond of writing, because it must be crazy good!
4Claire HayasakaGoodness, for a person not fond of poetry, you sure write good poetry!=)
I want to read stuff you are fond of writing, because it must be crazy good!
10/5/2008 c1 9EmmaBoleyn12-01-94
you really encapuslated annes feelings for henry beautifully, i loved the line "For i know in truth i will never be smiled upon by fate" and "Some Phanton, nothing more than a memory" i adored the line "that hour you have chosen" and all it portraid, the way she was always in control until he fell in love again, love is blind as they say. Really well written. The lines keep flashing back to me-kind of creepy, and eery knowing what happened to her.
9EmmaBoleyn12-01-94you really encapuslated annes feelings for henry beautifully, i loved the line "For i know in truth i will never be smiled upon by fate" and "Some Phanton, nothing more than a memory" i adored the line "that hour you have chosen" and all it portraid, the way she was always in control until he fell in love again, love is blind as they say. Really well written. The lines keep flashing back to me-kind of creepy, and eery knowing what happened to her.