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6/6/2012 c1 evi ive
great idea and great scene to have loralie and Jesse have together.
6/6/2012 c2 evi ive
how can you call that complete! it needs atleast one more chapter. PLEASE!
12/25/2008 c2 Liz86000
Great fic! :)
11/1/2008 c2 8I love Lukey
Awesome story line.

I'm so glad you outlined Lorelai's actions and how selfish she could be sometimes. Your take on Luke's reasons for hurting was really insightful. Luke was gruff and grumpy, but we know he always loved Lorelai, Rory, and Jess. This was a perfect little story to make things right.
10/11/2008 c2 Jeremy Shane
good story
10/11/2008 c2 50StanaTorv
yeah get rid of Chris...woohoo!

great chapter

:D sam
10/11/2008 c2 3Copop
Blah, stupid Chris interrupting them. But yay for Lorelai sending him away ;D Way to go, girl :D

Liked this story, thanks for writing :)
10/7/2008 c1 1cHoCoLaTe-cHiHuAhUa
Aw... This was really sweet. I loved it! I can't wait for more!
10/6/2008 c1 MistyBeach
I really like this so far. I like that Lorelai/Jess had interaction. Can't wait for an update!
10/5/2008 c1 Jeremy Shane
good chapter & more please
10/5/2008 c1 3Copop
I like this start.

I so hope Jess will be going back. For Lorelai's and Luke's sake.

It kinda sounds selfish, Lorelai saying she wants Jess to come back because Luke isn't talking to her like he used to. But then she said it's also for Jess' sake, and that was pretty much unselfish, so it should be fine :)

till the next update :)
10/5/2008 c1 21realornotreal22
Grr, i don't like Christopher. I hated when Luke was being all cold to Lorelai. Good story.

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