for SUMMER ALPHABET CHALLENGE 20081/9/2009 c7 YoungGrl
Oh oh Charlie's curious..um good.
now what will he find?
Good play with the alphabets... must join and take part.
Oh oh Charlie's curious..um good.
now what will he find?
Good play with the alphabets... must join and take part.
1/9/2009 c5 YoungGrl
So far so good. will continue... coming back soon for more.
So far so good. will continue... coming back soon for more.
1/9/2009 c1 YoungGrl
Hello... reading this now. very nice.
Hello... reading this now. very nice.
11/7/2008 c26 Hope06
Amazing story I loved how the last letter summed up everything so well
"Alan was proud of his eldest. He was the one to look out for Charlie when they were schooling. He knew from Miss Chang that some bullies used to pick on Charlie too, and Don would always be there for him."
Don will always be there for charlie that is for sure an it is the same the other way around
Amazng work
Amazing story I loved how the last letter summed up everything so well
"Alan was proud of his eldest. He was the one to look out for Charlie when they were schooling. He knew from Miss Chang that some bullies used to pick on Charlie too, and Don would always be there for him."
Don will always be there for charlie that is for sure an it is the same the other way around
Amazng work
11/7/2008 c26 sayatahu
Lovely chapter. sad to see this end. Hope you have more to come in the future.
love the interaction between father and sons... so funny and poor Alan.. no chance to speak his mind.
thank you.
(er... case still opened? )
Lovely chapter. sad to see this end. Hope you have more to come in the future.
love the interaction between father and sons... so funny and poor Alan.. no chance to speak his mind.
thank you.
(er... case still opened? )
11/4/2008 c25 sayatahu
OK nearly the end... what about this? Is there something to it.
*He thought about Jimmy. He might have taken some footage of people coming in and out of the school. That was a possibility he could look into. Only he had seen that man’s face…..*
You have not caught the baddie! Do continue or is it in the last chapter?
Good story. I've enjoyed it.
OK nearly the end... what about this? Is there something to it.
*He thought about Jimmy. He might have taken some footage of people coming in and out of the school. That was a possibility he could look into. Only he had seen that man’s face…..*
You have not caught the baddie! Do continue or is it in the last chapter?
Good story. I've enjoyed it.
11/2/2008 c23 Hakpoot90
Oh angtsy moments there..
Always love family scene... angtsy or happy.
good...
Oh angtsy moments there..
Always love family scene... angtsy or happy.
good...
11/2/2008 c22 Hakpoot90
ha ha very nice and the three jokers, yes?
Oh good two more... then you're done and I'm done. X-zams coming middle Nov.
ha ha very nice and the three jokers, yes?
Oh good two more... then you're done and I'm done. X-zams coming middle Nov.
210/30/2008 c23 sayatahu
Well, is Charlie going to 'pop' the question?
Seems like staying together is much better choice :D
Nice chapter.
Well, is Charlie going to 'pop' the question?
Seems like staying together is much better choice :D
Nice chapter.
10/29/2008 c22 sayatahu
Ha What a laugh... 3 jokers...Colby and Don? ha ha..
A good one there - Colby-Kobi...moto great play with names.
~~“Oh you are with him? You are together? You want to wait for him in here?” he asked Colby.
“No, no, I am not with him, but..~~
Nice chapter...
ur welcome,will try to rev. each chapter. nice going.
Ha What a laugh... 3 jokers...Colby and Don? ha ha..
A good one there - Colby-Kobi...moto great play with names.
~~“Oh you are with him? You are together? You want to wait for him in here?” he asked Colby.
“No, no, I am not with him, but..~~
Nice chapter...
ur welcome,will try to rev. each chapter. nice going.
10/28/2008 c21 Hakpoot90
[“Hey Don, you can’t wear those tight jeans to school. The principal will kick you out for indecent exposure or a distraction to the students.”
“This way, they could concentrate on Don instead of the lessons he will be ‘teaching’ ” one of the men said.]
HA HA HA..He has such beautiful 'B*' ~dreaming of it!
[“Hey Don, you can’t wear those tight jeans to school. The principal will kick you out for indecent exposure or a distraction to the students.”
“This way, they could concentrate on Don instead of the lessons he will be ‘teaching’ ” one of the men said.]
HA HA HA..He has such beautiful 'B*' ~dreaming of it!