Reviews: Line of Duty

1/23/2012 c20 Loera
Perhaps, some time, you'll come back to this story and rewrite it. The plot ideas are good but imho you hastened trough the chapters too fast.

11/28/2011 c20

1TheNabooQueen
Really liked the fic bit the ending was cut to short

Otherwise an awesome fic

4/6/2009 c20 librarymouse
Great story. Loved how you had the different POVs.

1/11/2009 c20 Wispr
Very nice ending.

Wispr

1/11/2009 c19 Wispr
Wonder if Sam will remember the healing device... if the NID hasn't taken it yet!

Wispr

1/11/2009 c18 Wispr
Ahh a very nasty cliff hanger!

Wispr

1/11/2009 c17 Wispr
A very touching moment! Hope Carter hasn't forgotten about Makepeace!

Wispr

1/11/2009 c16 Wispr
Doing a wonderful job with how you are writing Sam's behavior.

Wispr

1/11/2009 c15 Wispr
Good bit of writing with how Janet delayed the NID Doctor.

Wispr

1/11/2009 c14 Wispr
Why didn't Sam tell Janet about the NID agent?

Wispr

1/11/2009 c13 Wispr
Believable way for her return.

Wispr

1/11/2009 c12 Wispr
Now that was a funny chapter.

Wispr

1/11/2009 c10 Wispr
I like the difference in this AU story of yours. Makes for some very interesting reading.

Wispr

1/11/2009 c9 Wispr
Touching moment between Sam and Selmak.

Wispr

1/11/2009 c8 Wispr
Oh now that's a surprising turn of events. Forgot about the Tokra traitor.

Wispr

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