Reviews: Line of Duty

1/11/2009 c7 Wispr
Oh nasty bit of work with how traumatic the flashbacks are!

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1/11/2009 c6 Wispr
Good work in writing the other Tokra characters.

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1/11/2009 c5 Wispr
I like how you are doing Jolinar memories in Sam. Also you really getting the scenes strong emotions across to the reader.

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1/11/2009 c4 Wispr
You got Selmak written spot on. Really enjoying this story.

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1/11/2009 c3 Wispr
Fantastic work with Sam's reactions, came across very realistically.

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1/11/2009 c2 Wispr
You did a wonderful job of getting Jolinar's feelings of shame across very.

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1/11/2009 c1 Wispr
Your story got off to a very nice start. I like how you're writing Jolinar's thoughts.

Wispr

PS... Gould is actually spelled Goa'uld.

11/16/2008 c20

1AmandaTappingfan
great story, sorry I havent read it sooner but Im glad i finally got to :D

11/13/2008 c20 nexis44
really great story. look forward to more

11/12/2008 c20

25Eternal Density
minimalistic, but surprisingly it works. :D

well done.

11/10/2008 c19 dp
Very nice job.

11/10/2008 c19 Eternal Density
good chapter.

Nice little detail at the end - I don't remember anyone else using that in a fic before.

11/10/2008 c18 nexis44
just got caught up and i loved it. please update really really soon

11/9/2008 c18 Eternal Density
it worked.

that ending was quite shocking. the rest of the chapter was good too. :D Sam writing a note and Hammond pretending Sam was resigning was clever. Unfortunately not clever enough, it seems...

and it was nice to get the part with Cassie again from Sam's POV :D

11/9/2008 c18 dp
Nice chapter.

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