for Line of Duty10/26/2008 c10 
25Eternal Density
good chapter. glad to read there is plenty more to go. and great to see Cassie :D poor girl. ice-cream is a good idea :d
25Eternal Densitygood chapter. glad to read there is plenty more to go. and great to see Cassie :D poor girl. ice-cream is a good idea :d
10/25/2008 c8 Jo B
amazing does Sam get home and what is happening to the team
amazing does Sam get home and what is happening to the team
10/25/2008 c7 simone
Wicked fic keep it going
Wicked fic keep it going
10/22/2008 c8 Eternal Density
oh, Cordesh, I'd forgotten about that loose end...
wasn't expecting it to get exciting so soon. nice.
oh, Cordesh, I'd forgotten about that loose end...
wasn't expecting it to get exciting so soon. nice.
10/20/2008 c7 7Leighawen
This is a really interesting story. You're doing great! A few grammer errors, like when you wrote 'Seroushe wondering why?' you don't need the '?' because it's a statement not a qusetion. I really like this story. Keep up the good work! :D
7LeighawenThis is a really interesting story. You're doing great! A few grammer errors, like when you wrote 'Seroushe wondering why?' you don't need the '?' because it's a statement not a qusetion. I really like this story. Keep up the good work! :D
10/20/2008 c7 25Eternal Density
I suggest your work on punctuation a bit more. Some of your sentences run on rather long.
Poor Sam. You're doing a good job of showing how tough this is for her.
25Eternal DensityI suggest your work on punctuation a bit more. Some of your sentences run on rather long.
Poor Sam. You're doing a good job of showing how tough this is for her.
10/18/2008 c6 4legolasfreak2
Not a bad job! I like it! Interesting twist on the SG1 storyline. Keep it up :-)
4legolasfreak2Not a bad job! I like it! Interesting twist on the SG1 storyline. Keep it up :-)
10/18/2008 c6 1AmandaTappingfan
Great two chapters, one thing though, it says that tis is a Sam/Janet Story will there be any Janet in the following chapters?
1AmandaTappingfanGreat two chapters, one thing though, it says that tis is a Sam/Janet Story will there be any Janet in the following chapters?