for To Belong: A Teen Titans Story Based on Twilight4/2/2010 c3 
12Lady Fyria
i dont understand how you would think no one would want ot read this! your story is amazing! you must continue! if not for fun and enjoyment, but for us readers who like to read these stories!
~Moonlight
12Lady Fyriai dont understand how you would think no one would want ot read this! your story is amazing! you must continue! if not for fun and enjoyment, but for us readers who like to read these stories!
~Moonlight
8/13/2009 c3 myheroisbatman
Nah, you don't suck at writing...seriously, we can't all be pros on our first try. This story actually sounds pretty good, even if, you know, the author doesn't think so. Update SOON!
Nah, you don't suck at writing...seriously, we can't all be pros on our first try. This story actually sounds pretty good, even if, you know, the author doesn't think so. Update SOON!
12/16/2008 c3 9mythica magic
HEY you dont suck! i love this, its awsem and funny and mysterious, i wanna find out what happens next so please update! FOR ME! PWESE! PLEASE!X
9mythica magicHEY you dont suck! i love this, its awsem and funny and mysterious, i wanna find out what happens next so please update! FOR ME! PWESE! PLEASE!X
10/22/2008 c3 21Rianna Lauren
Hi... I just read this story right after I read "Teen Titans Idol" of yours...
Aren't u updating? I'm curious... :D :D :D
Plz continue if u will...
PLZ PLZ PLZ
I love these kind of stories...
Can I make a little suggestion?
Can u maybe put Starfire to speak like the way she did it in the show? Not too naive, though, just a little more to her characteristic...
thanks...
21Rianna LaurenHi... I just read this story right after I read "Teen Titans Idol" of yours...
Aren't u updating? I'm curious... :D :D :D
Plz continue if u will...
PLZ PLZ PLZ
I love these kind of stories...
Can I make a little suggestion?
Can u maybe put Starfire to speak like the way she did it in the show? Not too naive, though, just a little more to her characteristic...
thanks...
10/16/2008 c3 prettydamnsick
OMG OMG OMG :D
so, your new chapter is PRETY AWSOME.
and thank you for dedicating the chapter partially to me :) You make me feel special. YAY.
BUNNIES. BUNNIES. BUNIES! Bunnies are pretty rad. I tohught I should let you know :)
I feel wierd today. BUT I LOVE YOUR STORY.
forever your fann,
karinchanx3
OMG OMG OMG :D
so, your new chapter is PRETY AWSOME.
and thank you for dedicating the chapter partially to me :) You make me feel special. YAY.
BUNNIES. BUNNIES. BUNIES! Bunnies are pretty rad. I tohught I should let you know :)
I feel wierd today. BUT I LOVE YOUR STORY.
forever your fann,
karinchanx3
10/14/2008 c2 1xkNightx
Don't say THAT! Just try to rewrite what you didn't like and rewrite it. The firts chapter was ok you just needed detail but it's not the worst thing I have ever read...I've read worst. Just keep writting and you'll get better. Twilight and Teen Titans are Awesome!
@_@
1xkNightxDon't say THAT! Just try to rewrite what you didn't like and rewrite it. The firts chapter was ok you just needed detail but it's not the worst thing I have ever read...I've read worst. Just keep writting and you'll get better. Twilight and Teen Titans are Awesome!
@_@
10/14/2008 c2 prettydamnsick
WE. I enjoyed reading that :)
well, the first stort I wrote absolutely SUCKED. lucky youu, your way better then me. :P
I'm not lying. If I was lying, I probably wouldn't even submit a rrevieww :)
TRY, TRY AGIAN.
it wasen't a waste of my time.
:) Twilight and Teen Titans rule! :D
WE. I enjoyed reading that :)
well, the first stort I wrote absolutely SUCKED. lucky youu, your way better then me. :P
I'm not lying. If I was lying, I probably wouldn't even submit a rrevieww :)
TRY, TRY AGIAN.
it wasen't a waste of my time.
:) Twilight and Teen Titans rule! :D
10/14/2008 c2 11chittychittybangbang16
to be quiet honest noone's first piece of anything is very good. I wrote my first fanfic about two and half years ago and sucked so bad I'm now embarassed that I wrote it. If you really feel that strongly about it just rewrote whatever you didn't like. You only had one chapter so you should keep going and see where it takes you.
11chittychittybangbang16to be quiet honest noone's first piece of anything is very good. I wrote my first fanfic about two and half years ago and sucked so bad I'm now embarassed that I wrote it. If you really feel that strongly about it just rewrote whatever you didn't like. You only had one chapter so you should keep going and see where it takes you.