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5/24/2010 c1 KatePow
IT WAS AWESOME! (just like you said it would be) I can see why your sister wants to know the end...and the middle. I would give you a bunch of literary advice (I like you simile in line 6, Paragraph 4, Book 2), but that would frustrate us all since there is no criticism that I can think of. The end.
10/24/2008 c1 5Mellie E
Hi!

It's a pretty interesting start, can't wait to see what you're going to bring next.

It was a very well-written chapter. Hope to see more soon.

Cheers,

~Mellie~
10/23/2008 c1 26ssbailey
Oh great start! Can't wait to see what happens next!
10/23/2008 c1 83kdzl
Interesting idea, this was a well written chapter. I can't wait to see what you have in store.

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