for A Lost Cause8/16/2009 c1 
16meltedpoo
The prologue started with both of them fighting
And in the actual chapter, they are thinking of ways to keep the peace in all the girls
That is one weird chapter
But that makes it better :D
Aside from that, the chapter is very well written :)
16meltedpooThe prologue started with both of them fighting
And in the actual chapter, they are thinking of ways to keep the peace in all the girls
That is one weird chapter
But that makes it better :D
Aside from that, the chapter is very well written :)
12/18/2008 c2 30silverbirch
I think this could end up with casualties - lots of them! I'm so looking forward to it.
30silverbirchI think this could end up with casualties - lots of them! I'm so looking forward to it.
12/16/2008 c2 EasyButton
Ooh, who do thy like? Great story, keep up the good work!
Ooh, who do thy like? Great story, keep up the good work!
12/16/2008 c2 1dreaming.under.the.moon
O. I like it. :)
Although I am a little confused..but it will all come clearer in time right?
Anyway good chapter.
Update soon!
1dreaming.under.the.moonO. I like it. :)
Although I am a little confused..but it will all come clearer in time right?
Anyway good chapter.
Update soon!
12/16/2008 c2 3WinterhartZahneelCalina
yay! update! kkep up the good work and update again soon please?
3WinterhartZahneelCalinayay! update! kkep up the good work and update again soon please?
12/16/2008 c2 59tic tac toe 03
A little confusing so far but at the same time amazing please try and update a little quicker next time although i dont update for a while either. Great chapter though.
Tac
59tic tac toe 03A little confusing so far but at the same time amazing please try and update a little quicker next time although i dont update for a while either. Great chapter though.
Tac
11/30/2008 c1 swishhh
Ah mon Dieu!
WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED? WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? It's AMAZING! I LOVE Fred and George...LOVE them. They're so cool. Please continue.
Ah mon Dieu!
WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED? WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? It's AMAZING! I LOVE Fred and George...LOVE them. They're so cool. Please continue.
11/5/2008 c1 2darkshadowgirl666
I want to hear his plan. And I would also like to know why the twins were fighting at the start too.
The ending is a good way to get more readers. Curiosity almost always rules.
so I'll be reading the next chapter too.
xx shadow xx
2darkshadowgirl666I want to hear his plan. And I would also like to know why the twins were fighting at the start too.
The ending is a good way to get more readers. Curiosity almost always rules.
so I'll be reading the next chapter too.
xx shadow xx
11/2/2008 c1 6You're Just As Sane As I Am
sounds very promising. shh...im supposed to be doing homework right now...
6You're Just As Sane As I Amsounds very promising. shh...im supposed to be doing homework right now...
11/2/2008 c1 30silverbirch
Sounds very promising. I'll certainly run with it.
Some marvellous touches of humour in it so far. Loved the kippers.
30silverbirchSounds very promising. I'll certainly run with it.
Some marvellous touches of humour in it so far. Loved the kippers.