for Naruto Unchained6/10 c12 regfurby
Damn, I'm really eager to see the Mizuki confrontation... too bad the story hasn't been updated in some time.
Damn, I'm really eager to see the Mizuki confrontation... too bad the story hasn't been updated in some time.
5/10 c12 Anon
Great story. I like the fact that this Naruto is a professional, and acts like it. I'm curious about how Naruto will act towards some of the people he interacts with later. Also, when does he abandon Konoha? I'm looking forward to that interaction, as, personally, I don't see him staying there much longer. I see him being much more comfortable in Kumo, with others of his kind.
Great story. I like the fact that this Naruto is a professional, and acts like it. I'm curious about how Naruto will act towards some of the people he interacts with later. Also, when does he abandon Konoha? I'm looking forward to that interaction, as, personally, I don't see him staying there much longer. I see him being much more comfortable in Kumo, with others of his kind.
5/3 c2 
1Takashi Kirimaru
Too little mature stuff dude. Though it is up to you if you want to go further...Whatever, i liked the story just fine
1Takashi KirimaruToo little mature stuff dude. Though it is up to you if you want to go further...Whatever, i liked the story just fine
4/30 c12 Guest
I hope you return and finish this it is a very good read and I do hope to read more of it.
I hope you return and finish this it is a very good read and I do hope to read more of it.
4/30 c5 Guest
technically there isn't much difference with daemon and demon they are both demonic in appearance as well as nature. I think the only difference is their personality and the fact some are more human looking than others.
technically there isn't much difference with daemon and demon they are both demonic in appearance as well as nature. I think the only difference is their personality and the fact some are more human looking than others.
4/25 c1 9KuroKanashimi
i hate it when fics make sarutobi a saint & naruto his Bitch... if kyuubi saw that part then she should know he didn't say he was the yondaimes son... thats WHY he isn't seen as hero... God i hate that sarutobi has villages interest in his heart not naruto's... sarutobi deny's him everything... i'll go on but i'm a bit pissed... i do hope your naruto doesn't disappoint
9KuroKanashimii hate it when fics make sarutobi a saint & naruto his Bitch... if kyuubi saw that part then she should know he didn't say he was the yondaimes son... thats WHY he isn't seen as hero... God i hate that sarutobi has villages interest in his heart not naruto's... sarutobi deny's him everything... i'll go on but i'm a bit pissed... i do hope your naruto doesn't disappoint
4/11 c10 shermanique hall
Demon is spelled wrong sooooooo many times
Demon is spelled wrong sooooooo many times
4/7 c12 3chaos267
Very good very good. The personalities are very well made. Hiashi is kinda that mix between a father and doush clan head. He just kinda cold which is a nice spin with him although he would perfer to keep both daughters unsealed he puts clan first and then with hinatas freindship with naurto he ended up deciding to let it go because of its advantges. Then relationships wise very nice you're doing well. As for powers i'm liking them not that over powering raw rage or crazy bloodline most fics have anyways good stuff and i hope to see more
3chaos267Very good very good. The personalities are very well made. Hiashi is kinda that mix between a father and doush clan head. He just kinda cold which is a nice spin with him although he would perfer to keep both daughters unsealed he puts clan first and then with hinatas freindship with naurto he ended up deciding to let it go because of its advantges. Then relationships wise very nice you're doing well. As for powers i'm liking them not that over powering raw rage or crazy bloodline most fics have anyways good stuff and i hope to see more
4/5 c12 Alex2909
guess i shouldnt be surprised mizuki still frames naruto. look forward to naruto beating him into the ground
guess i shouldnt be surprised mizuki still frames naruto. look forward to naruto beating him into the ground