for Rain of Nightmares8/31/2009 c21 
5Once Upon An Oddity
Wow... that was... wow. It was just... amazing! So much HUMOR, so much ROMANCE (if i was an octopus, I'd cut my -er- tentical...thingies in half and give you a 16 thumbs up), so much ACTION (ditto on the tenical-er- thingie but maby I might cut one off and eat if (I hear octipus is really good...). It was great.
5Once Upon An OddityWow... that was... wow. It was just... amazing! So much HUMOR, so much ROMANCE (if i was an octopus, I'd cut my -er- tentical...thingies in half and give you a 16 thumbs up), so much ACTION (ditto on the tenical-er- thingie but maby I might cut one off and eat if (I hear octipus is really good...). It was great.
8/26/2009 c21 17The Great Mikey Weston
Okay, there's one word that pretty much summarizes everything you wrote as the preview, and the author's note.
W00T!
And finally, you spelled my name wrong...there's an H at the end. X3
~Michaiah - there's my name! o3o~
17The Great Mikey WestonOkay, there's one word that pretty much summarizes everything you wrote as the preview, and the author's note.
W00T!
And finally, you spelled my name wrong...there's an H at the end. X3
~Michaiah - there's my name! o3o~
8/6/2009 c21 24StaraLaura
I'm going to make this fast, I don't have that much time before my parents come home...
OMG OMG OMG, you DEDICATED the LAST chapter of RAIN OF NIGHTMARES to ME? Just because I got grounded? You're so sweet...
I loved it! It sure was a surprise when Hamtaro and Bijou hooked up, but I LOVED it. And the SxM in it? It's so cute! I love all the pairings in this story and Steel sounds like an awesome dude now. Even if I did like him sarcastic and evil.
All in all, GREAT job as always and I'm dying for FoE!
-sxmfan :3
24StaraLauraI'm going to make this fast, I don't have that much time before my parents come home...
OMG OMG OMG, you DEDICATED the LAST chapter of RAIN OF NIGHTMARES to ME? Just because I got grounded? You're so sweet...
I loved it! It sure was a surprise when Hamtaro and Bijou hooked up, but I LOVED it. And the SxM in it? It's so cute! I love all the pairings in this story and Steel sounds like an awesome dude now. Even if I did like him sarcastic and evil.
All in all, GREAT job as always and I'm dying for FoE!
-sxmfan :3
8/5/2009 c1 1Zovosks
I must tell you...
FACE IS COMMING. YOU WILL WORSHIP IT AS IF IT WAS A GOD...WHICH IT IS. HAVE YOU SACRAFICED AN UNBORN FETUS TO FACE? IF SO, FACE WILL BLESS YOU WITH A HEALTHY HARVEST OF CORN.
ALL HAIL FACE!
~FACE IS ALL-MERCIFUL
DUCKIE P.O.V
1ZovosksI must tell you...
FACE IS COMMING. YOU WILL WORSHIP IT AS IF IT WAS A GOD...WHICH IT IS. HAVE YOU SACRAFICED AN UNBORN FETUS TO FACE? IF SO, FACE WILL BLESS YOU WITH A HEALTHY HARVEST OF CORN.
ALL HAIL FACE!
~FACE IS ALL-MERCIFUL
DUCKIE P.O.V
8/4/2009 c21 7Cyndaquil255
Aw... it's over... Oh well. Hey, around when will FoE be up in september? Cause that's the month I was born in. Anyway, this was a great story. Can't wait for FoE! And is the ham sitting out gonna be Hamtaro? Seriously, is it? You go, Screech & Fury! ...And good luck.
7Cyndaquil255Aw... it's over... Oh well. Hey, around when will FoE be up in september? Cause that's the month I was born in. Anyway, this was a great story. Can't wait for FoE! And is the ham sitting out gonna be Hamtaro? Seriously, is it? You go, Screech & Fury! ...And good luck.
8/4/2009 c21 Theta Jones
Ahem, Okay... This is a VERY bittersweet moment, so I think it's fitting to say something about both sides; on the bitter side...
NO! D: D: D:
WHY DID IT HAVE TO END? WHY?
BUT, on the sweet side...
WHO HOO HOO HO! :D :D :D
IT'S FINALLY FINISHED! ON TO FOE! YIPPE, HA HA HA! :D
... Okay, I admit it: I'm feeling a little more sweet than I am bitter... But it's only because I'm so darn exited about Forest of Eternity! Which reminds me...
MID-SEPTEMBER? I DON'T THINK I CAN WAIT THAT LONG!
Not to mention the fact that "Halo 3; ODST" will be coming out in September... Ah well; I guess this means I have more to look forward to this September, doesn't it? But still...
WHY? T.T
(As you can probably tell by all the 'screaming', I'm in a VERY happy mood right now...)
Okay, let's see... anything in particular I wanna' point out? Hm... Oh, I know!
"Flo got fired" - L.O.L. :)
Twins -... AWESOME. AWESOME. AWESOME! :D
Soren - Well, I know what I gotta' do now...
All the romance these past 2 chapters - LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! :D :D :D (Big big BIG smiley face! :D)
Anything else? I don't think so...
Glad/sad that it's over, & cannot cannot CANNOT wait for Forest of Eternity! (CANNOT!)
-Theta Jones
Ahem, Okay... This is a VERY bittersweet moment, so I think it's fitting to say something about both sides; on the bitter side...
NO! D: D: D:
WHY DID IT HAVE TO END? WHY?
BUT, on the sweet side...
WHO HOO HOO HO! :D :D :D
IT'S FINALLY FINISHED! ON TO FOE! YIPPE, HA HA HA! :D
... Okay, I admit it: I'm feeling a little more sweet than I am bitter... But it's only because I'm so darn exited about Forest of Eternity! Which reminds me...
MID-SEPTEMBER? I DON'T THINK I CAN WAIT THAT LONG!
Not to mention the fact that "Halo 3; ODST" will be coming out in September... Ah well; I guess this means I have more to look forward to this September, doesn't it? But still...
WHY? T.T
(As you can probably tell by all the 'screaming', I'm in a VERY happy mood right now...)
Okay, let's see... anything in particular I wanna' point out? Hm... Oh, I know!
"Flo got fired" - L.O.L. :)
Twins -... AWESOME. AWESOME. AWESOME! :D
Soren - Well, I know what I gotta' do now...
All the romance these past 2 chapters - LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! :D :D :D (Big big BIG smiley face! :D)
Anything else? I don't think so...
Glad/sad that it's over, & cannot cannot CANNOT wait for Forest of Eternity! (CANNOT!)
-Theta Jones
8/4/2009 c21 5Deston
Obviously Hamtaro wouldn't know what expecting means. :)
21 Chapters and 240k words, and I'm still very into this story. The ending gave it the right amount of closure, and even a little HxB too! It's like my birthday. :D I can't wait for FoE, so don't keep us waiting too long, alright?
5DestonObviously Hamtaro wouldn't know what expecting means. :)
21 Chapters and 240k words, and I'm still very into this story. The ending gave it the right amount of closure, and even a little HxB too! It's like my birthday. :D I can't wait for FoE, so don't keep us waiting too long, alright?
7/31/2009 c19 17The Great Mikey Weston
Um, LOL?
I have to say that this entire chapter felt a little angsty, but that does give the right feeling. Aah, actually, I looked around and now I seem to be hearing the name Soren everywhere o-o Isn't that strange? (Darn, I still kinda wish it had been Sorbet. XD)
I'm guessing, MAYBE, next chapter will involve Screech and Fury's wedding X3 Believe it or not, in a trilogy I'm writing, one of the last chapters in the second book is a wedding, LOL. I find it gives kind of a peaceful air, if someone doesn't come crash it (coughVILLAINScough) XD But that's besides the point.
I've actually enjoyed the Laura-free chapters XP Oh well, all good things must come to an end, sadly. Great chapter and looking forward to the finale!
~Michaiah (SIGHH)~
17The Great Mikey WestonUm, LOL?
I have to say that this entire chapter felt a little angsty, but that does give the right feeling. Aah, actually, I looked around and now I seem to be hearing the name Soren everywhere o-o Isn't that strange? (Darn, I still kinda wish it had been Sorbet. XD)
I'm guessing, MAYBE, next chapter will involve Screech and Fury's wedding X3 Believe it or not, in a trilogy I'm writing, one of the last chapters in the second book is a wedding, LOL. I find it gives kind of a peaceful air, if someone doesn't come crash it (coughVILLAINScough) XD But that's besides the point.
I've actually enjoyed the Laura-free chapters XP Oh well, all good things must come to an end, sadly. Great chapter and looking forward to the finale!
~Michaiah (SIGHH)~
7/31/2009 c19 24StaraLaura
GACK, I KNOW THAT TUNE TO SCREECH'S SONG! I TOTALLY FORGOT NOW! THANKS TO YOU, I'M GOING TO RIP MY HAIR OUT TO FIGURE THIS OUT!
Now, that the screams are over... NIKOLAI! ~tackles Nikolai~ HE'S ALIVE, OH, MY FRIGGN' G, HE'S ALIVE! YOU'RE NOT A COLD HEARTED WELP ANYMORE, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! (Just kidding, you were never cold hearted in the first place, you were just a welp. JK JK JK)
I wonder how Joy made it... That was a pretty big fall. Oh, well, everyone got the happy ending they wanted and I'm glad to see everything is resolved. I felt kinda bad for Steel/Soredn (I'm just going to call him Steel) b/c he was knocked upside the head when he was about to explode. I reread that over and over again and I laugh every time. Boss is so awesome sometimes.
Ah, Starbucks... I'm going for a French vanilla frappachino.
I'm sad to see this story come to a close, but it was so worth the read and I can't wait for the FoE. You know, I just realized that each abbreviation for this series spells somthing out. RoN as in the name Ron, FoE as in foe, and GT as "Gifted and Talented". XD It's a class for the "Gifted and Talented". Still am confused why I got in it every year so far in grade school...
Great work and thanks for the add on facebook!
-sxmfan :3
24StaraLauraGACK, I KNOW THAT TUNE TO SCREECH'S SONG! I TOTALLY FORGOT NOW! THANKS TO YOU, I'M GOING TO RIP MY HAIR OUT TO FIGURE THIS OUT!
Now, that the screams are over... NIKOLAI! ~tackles Nikolai~ HE'S ALIVE, OH, MY FRIGGN' G, HE'S ALIVE! YOU'RE NOT A COLD HEARTED WELP ANYMORE, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! (Just kidding, you were never cold hearted in the first place, you were just a welp. JK JK JK)
I wonder how Joy made it... That was a pretty big fall. Oh, well, everyone got the happy ending they wanted and I'm glad to see everything is resolved. I felt kinda bad for Steel/Soredn (I'm just going to call him Steel) b/c he was knocked upside the head when he was about to explode. I reread that over and over again and I laugh every time. Boss is so awesome sometimes.
Ah, Starbucks... I'm going for a French vanilla frappachino.
I'm sad to see this story come to a close, but it was so worth the read and I can't wait for the FoE. You know, I just realized that each abbreviation for this series spells somthing out. RoN as in the name Ron, FoE as in foe, and GT as "Gifted and Talented". XD It's a class for the "Gifted and Talented". Still am confused why I got in it every year so far in grade school...
Great work and thanks for the add on facebook!
-sxmfan :3
7/30/2009 c19 Theta Jones
Dang it... I'm running out of different stuff to say... ah well. I guess I'll just use the same word I've been using...
AWESOME!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
-Theta Jones
Dang it... I'm running out of different stuff to say... ah well. I guess I'll just use the same word I've been using...
AWESOME!
Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
-Theta Jones
7/30/2009 c19 7Cyndaquil255
=D THEY DIDN'T DIE! YAY! HORRAY FOR THE ABILITY TO SURVIVE AN EXTREMELY STRONG ATTACK AND PONDS UNDER BRIDGES! Hey... WAIT A MINUTE! Hamsters can't swim... (really fast and acusation-like) IS JOY RELATED TO SEAMORE?
7Cyndaquil255=D THEY DIDN'T DIE! YAY! HORRAY FOR THE ABILITY TO SURVIVE AN EXTREMELY STRONG ATTACK AND PONDS UNDER BRIDGES! Hey... WAIT A MINUTE! Hamsters can't swim... (really fast and acusation-like) IS JOY RELATED TO SEAMORE?
7/22/2009 c18 17The Great Mikey Weston
Okay, so when I heard Steel's name, I thought two things.
1. Darn, I was hoping it would be something ridiculous like Sorbet.
2. Kingdom Hearts much? XD;
Nice chapter! Actually, I didn't think of the poem, the whole time my head was screaming 'JUST SAY I LOVE YOU ALREADY, DANGIT!' XD Oh well, it's a great chapter! ^w^
Since I'm actually really busy right now, I think I'll save the rest of my random rants for later, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
~Michaiah, multitasking and epicly failing at doing so~
17The Great Mikey WestonOkay, so when I heard Steel's name, I thought two things.
1. Darn, I was hoping it would be something ridiculous like Sorbet.
2. Kingdom Hearts much? XD;
Nice chapter! Actually, I didn't think of the poem, the whole time my head was screaming 'JUST SAY I LOVE YOU ALREADY, DANGIT!' XD Oh well, it's a great chapter! ^w^
Since I'm actually really busy right now, I think I'll save the rest of my random rants for later, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
~Michaiah, multitasking and epicly failing at doing so~
7/19/2009 c18 5Deston
Cause no one screws with Hamtaro. I'm surprised I've followed this and the prequel fic without reviewing. My bad. :(
In any case, I think this story is awesome. Can't wait to see how things turn out!
5DestonCause no one screws with Hamtaro. I'm surprised I've followed this and the prequel fic without reviewing. My bad. :(
In any case, I think this story is awesome. Can't wait to see how things turn out!
7/19/2009 c18 Theta Jones
GAH! SO MANY CLIFFHANGERS! *screams of pain*... Okay... okay... I'm better now... *looks back at the chapter... more screams of pain*
Screech/Fury - I don't really like using this word anymore, because I get the feeling that it's becoming redundant, but... AWESOME! I have to admit, I had pictured it just a wee bit differently, but hey, this works just as well! :)
Steel - "Soren"... GAH! THAT IDEA POPPED INTO MY HEAD, LIKE... 3 TIMES! BUT I DISMISSED IT EVERY TIME AS "UNLIKELY"! *face-palms* Idiot! (Note: I'm calling myself an idot! Not you!)
Okay, okay... I don't think I've ever looked forward to a next chapter more than I am right now. I mean it. I'm about to start beating my brains out on my desk because of all these cliffhangers... Well... Really, I guess there's only 2 cliffhangers... but I'll be 'derned' if they ain't 2 of the biggest cliffhangers I've ever seen! YEE DOGGIES! (Sorry... Southern heritage combined with a good mood... not my fault...) Anyway... as I was saying before, I cannot cannot cannot cannot CANNOT wait for the next chapter! (CANNOT!) :D
-Theta Jones
GAH! SO MANY CLIFFHANGERS! *screams of pain*... Okay... okay... I'm better now... *looks back at the chapter... more screams of pain*
Screech/Fury - I don't really like using this word anymore, because I get the feeling that it's becoming redundant, but... AWESOME! I have to admit, I had pictured it just a wee bit differently, but hey, this works just as well! :)
Steel - "Soren"... GAH! THAT IDEA POPPED INTO MY HEAD, LIKE... 3 TIMES! BUT I DISMISSED IT EVERY TIME AS "UNLIKELY"! *face-palms* Idiot! (Note: I'm calling myself an idot! Not you!)
Okay, okay... I don't think I've ever looked forward to a next chapter more than I am right now. I mean it. I'm about to start beating my brains out on my desk because of all these cliffhangers... Well... Really, I guess there's only 2 cliffhangers... but I'll be 'derned' if they ain't 2 of the biggest cliffhangers I've ever seen! YEE DOGGIES! (Sorry... Southern heritage combined with a good mood... not my fault...) Anyway... as I was saying before, I cannot cannot cannot cannot CANNOT wait for the next chapter! (CANNOT!) :D
-Theta Jones
7/19/2009 c18 24StaraLaura
DANGIT, I THOUGHT STEEL'S REAL NAME WAS SORA AND HE GREW UP IN THE VIDEO GAME KINGDOM OF HEARTS OR SOMETHING!
I did NOT see that coming. I really liked how everything came full circle here, with Sandy's heartbreak, the poem, and Steel's real name. Pretty awesome wrap up to a pretty awesome battle, huh? I can't belive that this is almost over, I was enjoying this story so much. : (
Anyway, I can't wait for more!
-sxmfan :3
P.S. You know those pictures of your OC's that I said I'd draw. I'm going to wait until the end of the story to post them. Oh, and my plan is to have them in human form and hamster form. So if you want any of that art... FINISH UP THE STORY FASTER! JK JK, take your time!
24StaraLauraDANGIT, I THOUGHT STEEL'S REAL NAME WAS SORA AND HE GREW UP IN THE VIDEO GAME KINGDOM OF HEARTS OR SOMETHING!
I did NOT see that coming. I really liked how everything came full circle here, with Sandy's heartbreak, the poem, and Steel's real name. Pretty awesome wrap up to a pretty awesome battle, huh? I can't belive that this is almost over, I was enjoying this story so much. : (
Anyway, I can't wait for more!
-sxmfan :3
P.S. You know those pictures of your OC's that I said I'd draw. I'm going to wait until the end of the story to post them. Oh, and my plan is to have them in human form and hamster form. So if you want any of that art... FINISH UP THE STORY FASTER! JK JK, take your time!