for Vacation11/19/2008 c5 hotchner
That was an AWESOME Chapter. I hope that Hotch makes it
through this alright and I hope that he get's to see Jack
soon. I'm glad that they got the guy who did this to him and
I'm glad that Rossi decked the creep. I'm also glad that they
reliaze that the girl didn't want to hurt Hotch. Keep up the
AWESOME Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.
THANK YOU!
That was an AWESOME Chapter. I hope that Hotch makes it
through this alright and I hope that he get's to see Jack
soon. I'm glad that they got the guy who did this to him and
I'm glad that Rossi decked the creep. I'm also glad that they
reliaze that the girl didn't want to hurt Hotch. Keep up the
AWESOME Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.
THANK YOU!
11/19/2008 c5 
9zippy zany
I just started to read this story this morning and an update already. Very cool, looking forward to the rest of it!
9zippy zanyI just started to read this story this morning and an update already. Very cool, looking forward to the rest of it!
11/19/2008 c5 bookworm86
It's great that you updated again already, and 2 chapters at that!
I wish Rossi had pounded Travis some more, but then he shouldn't get into trouble for such a low-life. Great description of the medical treatments! Few stories ever go into that much detail.
I'm looking forward to the final chapters! *
It's great that you updated again already, and 2 chapters at that!
I wish Rossi had pounded Travis some more, but then he shouldn't get into trouble for such a low-life. Great description of the medical treatments! Few stories ever go into that much detail.
I'm looking forward to the final chapters! *
11/18/2008 c3 frommy6
Hello,
Just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying your story. You do a very good job of keeping the characters true and the story is good without over the top drama that a lot of the fanfics suffer from.
I look forward to more!
Hello,
Just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying your story. You do a very good job of keeping the characters true and the story is good without over the top drama that a lot of the fanfics suffer from.
I look forward to more!
11/18/2008 c3 bookworm86
Ouch. Poor Hotch!
This is really intense. The description of his injuries and the pain he was in was really well written. I also liked the interweaving with the team's activities. And isn't it ironic, after abandoning Hotch, that Haley would be the one to call attention to his disappearance? ;)
I'm looking forward to reading what happens next. :)
Ouch. Poor Hotch!
This is really intense. The description of his injuries and the pain he was in was really well written. I also liked the interweaving with the team's activities. And isn't it ironic, after abandoning Hotch, that Haley would be the one to call attention to his disappearance? ;)
I'm looking forward to reading what happens next. :)
11/11/2008 c3 10amaranth-moon15
I wouldn't say I *like* this at all...
...in the sense I don't like to see Hotch injured ;o)
But it's a very suspenseful start, and I'm looking forward to see how it continues!
10amaranth-moon15I wouldn't say I *like* this at all...
...in the sense I don't like to see Hotch injured ;o)
But it's a very suspenseful start, and I'm looking forward to see how it continues!
11/10/2008 c3 16Nancy J. Lisse
this is good, you should continue, i like emily/hotch fics, and this should make a good casefile... look forward to reading more
16Nancy J. Lissethis is good, you should continue, i like emily/hotch fics, and this should make a good casefile... look forward to reading more