for The Temple of Doom1/4/2009 c5 aquablade
Good story! The characters were n character the whole time. I thought it was funny. You should rite more XS based off of movies.
Good story! The characters were n character the whole time. I thought it was funny. You should rite more XS based off of movies.
1/1/2009 c5 AFObsessed Again
Darn fanfiction and their huge 'submit feedback' buttons! I accidentally pressed it halfway through my chapter five review! So here is what i would have said next-
which made me smile! And that little omi insult at the end was funny too! Great story, and I cant wait to read The Play! Merry (Late) Christmas, and Happy New years!
Darn fanfiction and their huge 'submit feedback' buttons! I accidentally pressed it halfway through my chapter five review! So here is what i would have said next-
which made me smile! And that little omi insult at the end was funny too! Great story, and I cant wait to read The Play! Merry (Late) Christmas, and Happy New years!
1/1/2009 c5 AandFObsessed
Aga sorry sorry sorry! Every xmas me and my family vacation in florida for a few weeks and i sort of forgot to mention that i wouldnt be reviewing for a while, but i got back in time for new years and for your new story (I'll be sending in a review for that in a second =]) But right now im focusing on this chapter! This story certainly was fun and exciting and im really sad that its over! But if it had to end atleast it ended with a kick ** chapter =D This was super long and filled with tons of action, a killer combination! Plus there was a tiny little bit of Raikim in it, w
Aga sorry sorry sorry! Every xmas me and my family vacation in florida for a few weeks and i sort of forgot to mention that i wouldnt be reviewing for a while, but i got back in time for new years and for your new story (I'll be sending in a review for that in a second =]) But right now im focusing on this chapter! This story certainly was fun and exciting and im really sad that its over! But if it had to end atleast it ended with a kick ** chapter =D This was super long and filled with tons of action, a killer combination! Plus there was a tiny little bit of Raikim in it, w
12/28/2008 c5 MySpaceSavvy
Bahahah i love that line at the end! This story started great and ended even better! It had tons of action and even a little romance at the end (Thank you thank you thank you =D!) I went to youtube and listened to that song, and i see what you mean about it being so emotional, i was tearing up ='[ Onto the authors note.. Consider yourself lucky for having to shovel so little, I get stuck doing it every snowfall! And if I had the tan and red shirt I would've still worn it, just to make people nauseous =D I am definately a cautious person, usually a little more than i should be! I always get paranoid that some strange thing is going to happen so i always force myself to have any situation planned out. A little wierd, but it's worked out for me so far ;-) This was a fantastic story, and I can't wait for The Play! =D
Bahahah i love that line at the end! This story started great and ended even better! It had tons of action and even a little romance at the end (Thank you thank you thank you =D!) I went to youtube and listened to that song, and i see what you mean about it being so emotional, i was tearing up ='[ Onto the authors note.. Consider yourself lucky for having to shovel so little, I get stuck doing it every snowfall! And if I had the tan and red shirt I would've still worn it, just to make people nauseous =D I am definately a cautious person, usually a little more than i should be! I always get paranoid that some strange thing is going to happen so i always force myself to have any situation planned out. A little wierd, but it's worked out for me so far ;-) This was a fantastic story, and I can't wait for The Play! =D
12/22/2008 c5 MooseTracks2020
Aww! I love that song! I was watching the movie it was from just the other day, and I was a mess! For the quiz question, I would definately rely on a variety of things, using pure strength doesn't necessarily make someone a strong person ;) I loved all the little details you included in this story, and the violence =D I also enjoyed all of the pyschoness; between Raimundos ** slaps, Kimikos evil streak, and Omi getting trapped in a child labor mine, it was all very entertaining! And I absolutely died at that little Raikim at the end, It was like an early christmas present! =D I'm pumped for The Play to come out, I have no doubt it will be as good as all of your other stories! Happy Holidays! =]
Aww! I love that song! I was watching the movie it was from just the other day, and I was a mess! For the quiz question, I would definately rely on a variety of things, using pure strength doesn't necessarily make someone a strong person ;) I loved all the little details you included in this story, and the violence =D I also enjoyed all of the pyschoness; between Raimundos ** slaps, Kimikos evil streak, and Omi getting trapped in a child labor mine, it was all very entertaining! And I absolutely died at that little Raikim at the end, It was like an early christmas present! =D I'm pumped for The Play to come out, I have no doubt it will be as good as all of your other stories! Happy Holidays! =]
12/22/2008 c5 
9GoddessOfBassoons
Um... is kinda an answer? No, I'm not VERY VERY cautious.
Great. I like how Dojos all cheerful on the cart ride. "Everyone, put your hands in the air!" lol.
It was a little rushed, but I liked it. First time Master Fungs left the Temple willingly? I forgot. I havn't seen the show in so long. Well, the second and third season. I have the first on DVD.
I know that song. It was really sad, yet happy. Kinda like "Shake Me I Rattle," Except it was just the girl.
Merry Christmas!
~Xiaolinwind
9GoddessOfBassoonsUm... is kinda an answer? No, I'm not VERY VERY cautious.
Great. I like how Dojos all cheerful on the cart ride. "Everyone, put your hands in the air!" lol.
It was a little rushed, but I liked it. First time Master Fungs left the Temple willingly? I forgot. I havn't seen the show in so long. Well, the second and third season. I have the first on DVD.
I know that song. It was really sad, yet happy. Kinda like "Shake Me I Rattle," Except it was just the girl.
Merry Christmas!
~Xiaolinwind
12/19/2008 c4 MySpaceSavvy
Oo! Intense! As usual, awesome action scene in the beginning with Omi&Clay, and at the end with all the fire shield suspense! There were also a few funy parts in it, like when Rai slapped Kimiko (Even though it wasnt remotely her fault XD) For the helmet thing, I just wear a regular one. I like simple things, and too much design makes me dizzy =] I wish I could write more but I have to wake up at 7 to help my dad shovel the snow from a storm we had yesterday,(He never got a son so he expects me to fill the labor-intensive void =D) Great chapter and update soon!
Oo! Intense! As usual, awesome action scene in the beginning with Omi&Clay, and at the end with all the fire shield suspense! There were also a few funy parts in it, like when Rai slapped Kimiko (Even though it wasnt remotely her fault XD) For the helmet thing, I just wear a regular one. I like simple things, and too much design makes me dizzy =] I wish I could write more but I have to wake up at 7 to help my dad shovel the snow from a storm we had yesterday,(He never got a son so he expects me to fill the labor-intensive void =D) Great chapter and update soon!
12/14/2008 c4 MooseTracks2020
Aughh! Stupid Fanfiction! I was looking for my review reply when i realized there wasnt one, and then i realized that my review was never sent! I wrote a wicked long one and i was proud of myself because i found the story the first few minutes it got updated. I'm 99% sure i submitted it too, but I guess i'll just have to check that it found its way to the story from now on. But enough about that, This chapter was great! I loved when Raimundo slapped Kimiko, i was cracking up =D I cant wait for the next chapter to find out what happened to her too! For the last quiz question, I usually don't wear a helmet. I wish I knew what this one was though =[ Well usually i have a fun story to go along with the question, and Im far too lazy to retype the one from last time, so this review's a little short. Just know that this chapter was awesome and i cant wait for the next one!
Aughh! Stupid Fanfiction! I was looking for my review reply when i realized there wasnt one, and then i realized that my review was never sent! I wrote a wicked long one and i was proud of myself because i found the story the first few minutes it got updated. I'm 99% sure i submitted it too, but I guess i'll just have to check that it found its way to the story from now on. But enough about that, This chapter was great! I loved when Raimundo slapped Kimiko, i was cracking up =D I cant wait for the next chapter to find out what happened to her too! For the last quiz question, I usually don't wear a helmet. I wish I knew what this one was though =[ Well usually i have a fun story to go along with the question, and Im far too lazy to retype the one from last time, so this review's a little short. Just know that this chapter was awesome and i cant wait for the next one!
12/14/2008 c4 2FlameToungue
wow i feel special i got mentioned great job this story adapts well to them
2FlameTounguewow i feel special i got mentioned great job this story adapts well to them
12/14/2008 c4 9GoddessOfBassoons
My helemet is solid blue. :D
Wow, lot's of action on this one. Very well written, I might add. I like Omi in this one, “Farewell! We shall come back for you, my friends. But first we must check on our most best friends.”
That made me laugh.
Good job, again, and keep it up!
~Xiaolinwind
9GoddessOfBassoonsMy helemet is solid blue. :D
Wow, lot's of action on this one. Very well written, I might add. I like Omi in this one, “Farewell! We shall come back for you, my friends. But first we must check on our most best friends.”
That made me laugh.
Good job, again, and keep it up!
~Xiaolinwind
12/13/2008 c3 AandFObsessed
Woo Hoo! Chapter 3! But its oh so very frusterating! I dont know what Sheeno is pulling on Kimiko, but i dont like it one bit! Hopefully she snapped out of it when she got thrown against the column =] But if not, Clay and Omi better haul their butts over to that chamber soon! And as for Mr Maharaja, shouldn't he be aware that his guests are about to be killed? Not a very good ruler if you ask me.. Unless he is Sheeno? Ugh now Im frustrated AND confused! Hopefully chapter four can clear my mind =] For the quiz, I would have to say I'd choose option B, because I would be honored to help out in the field of science! All the stuff that people are trying to make happen today and in the future fascinate me, and I think it would be sweet to take part in that! Plus that means I could probably get a few patents, which means lots of money for me! (Bahaha I sound like such a selfish jerk right now), but who doesn't love money? Maybe I would even be able to renew Xiaolin Showdown for a season four! But thats probably just wishful thinking (sob) Well great job on this chapter, and i cant wait for the next update!
Woo Hoo! Chapter 3! But its oh so very frusterating! I dont know what Sheeno is pulling on Kimiko, but i dont like it one bit! Hopefully she snapped out of it when she got thrown against the column =] But if not, Clay and Omi better haul their butts over to that chamber soon! And as for Mr Maharaja, shouldn't he be aware that his guests are about to be killed? Not a very good ruler if you ask me.. Unless he is Sheeno? Ugh now Im frustrated AND confused! Hopefully chapter four can clear my mind =] For the quiz, I would have to say I'd choose option B, because I would be honored to help out in the field of science! All the stuff that people are trying to make happen today and in the future fascinate me, and I think it would be sweet to take part in that! Plus that means I could probably get a few patents, which means lots of money for me! (Bahaha I sound like such a selfish jerk right now), but who doesn't love money? Maybe I would even be able to renew Xiaolin Showdown for a season four! But thats probably just wishful thinking (sob) Well great job on this chapter, and i cant wait for the next update!
12/13/2008 c3 MySpaceSavvy
Boo Sheeno! I cant wait until he falls into that pit of lava! (Which better happen in the climax, or i'll go nuts with the lack of revenge ;D) Im not sure whether Omi and Clay will get to Raimundo first, or whether Kimiko stops being such a hypnotized biotch, but I hope to god something happens soon! I feel bad, but i must have missed that quiz question! For the one from chapter 2, Im more independant, just because I don't like when people try to control me =] And just to catch myself up, basing the next question off your review responses, Im in the habit of wearing a helmet because my parents are safety fanatics, so i guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree, right? Awesome chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! =D
Boo Sheeno! I cant wait until he falls into that pit of lava! (Which better happen in the climax, or i'll go nuts with the lack of revenge ;D) Im not sure whether Omi and Clay will get to Raimundo first, or whether Kimiko stops being such a hypnotized biotch, but I hope to god something happens soon! I feel bad, but i must have missed that quiz question! For the one from chapter 2, Im more independant, just because I don't like when people try to control me =] And just to catch myself up, basing the next question off your review responses, Im in the habit of wearing a helmet because my parents are safety fanatics, so i guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree, right? Awesome chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! =D