for The Tragedy of Marluxia, Lord of Castle Oblivion11/24/2008 c2 
9chaostition
Wow... People actually listen to me. That can't be a good sign. But on a lighter note, which mode did you use? Kamikaze mode scares the crap out of me, but normal mode's "Negative Reinforcement" usually has me laughing and dancing and completely losing track of what the hell I was doing. I noticed you had some spacing issues too... that's the only thing I don't like about Write or Die.
I can say that I like everyone's characterization for this story. Reading Larxene's bits makes me happy. (LE GASP! I'm actually happy now! Yay.) She's preaching the truth about the flowers...
Buy me a drink, Sing me a song, Take me as I come 'cause I can't stay long
(Mary Jane's Last Dance ~ Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers)
LUV's from Khaos
9chaostitionWow... People actually listen to me. That can't be a good sign. But on a lighter note, which mode did you use? Kamikaze mode scares the crap out of me, but normal mode's "Negative Reinforcement" usually has me laughing and dancing and completely losing track of what the hell I was doing. I noticed you had some spacing issues too... that's the only thing I don't like about Write or Die.
I can say that I like everyone's characterization for this story. Reading Larxene's bits makes me happy. (LE GASP! I'm actually happy now! Yay.) She's preaching the truth about the flowers...
Buy me a drink, Sing me a song, Take me as I come 'cause I can't stay long
(Mary Jane's Last Dance ~ Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers)
LUV's from Khaos
11/24/2008 c2 6CheshireCatwoman
Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter! *coughstupidcliffhangercough* Anyway, Larxene is cruel! Then again, this is Larxene...She is scary. I feel bad for Marluxia though, because she's just dragging him into this and he gets almost no say unless he wants to be electrocuted. I loved it when Larxene laughed at the concept of Marluxia being superior. (bwah ha ha the plotting begins!) Also, thanks for introducing us to Write or Die!
6CheshireCatwomanWow, I can't wait for the next chapter! *coughstupidcliffhangercough* Anyway, Larxene is cruel! Then again, this is Larxene...She is scary. I feel bad for Marluxia though, because she's just dragging him into this and he gets almost no say unless he wants to be electrocuted. I loved it when Larxene laughed at the concept of Marluxia being superior. (bwah ha ha the plotting begins!) Also, thanks for introducing us to Write or Die!
11/11/2008 c1 CheshireCatwoman
Holy crap, this is great! I love the role listing at the end - Larxene could make a great Lady Macbeth. Here's my favorite parts: Marluxia and Vexen walking through the forest. "I get the chill factor, you get the vegetation. Everyone wins." Also, “I wasn’t plotting anything!” XD One more thing: "“Ah, what the Hell!” said Number II and he gave the Superior a huge hug." This scene makes me want to draw it. Excuse my hyperness, but this is one of the best fics I've seen in a while. Plus Marluxia's my fav Org. member. Oh, and happy 11/11 day XD
Holy crap, this is great! I love the role listing at the end - Larxene could make a great Lady Macbeth. Here's my favorite parts: Marluxia and Vexen walking through the forest. "I get the chill factor, you get the vegetation. Everyone wins." Also, “I wasn’t plotting anything!” XD One more thing: "“Ah, what the Hell!” said Number II and he gave the Superior a huge hug." This scene makes me want to draw it. Excuse my hyperness, but this is one of the best fics I've seen in a while. Plus Marluxia's my fav Org. member. Oh, and happy 11/11 day XD
11/10/2008 c1 9chaostition
You must be psychic or something because, (voila!) here I am.
It seems like an interesting story and your handy translation chart has given me an idea about what shall happen, but that won't keep me from reading it. What can I say? Your stories have an irresistible charm about them.
I'm gonna see if I'm still sane enough to work a little on my side story tonight. Heh! I'm not sane at all.
LUV's from Khaos
9chaostitionYou must be psychic or something because, (voila!) here I am.
It seems like an interesting story and your handy translation chart has given me an idea about what shall happen, but that won't keep me from reading it. What can I say? Your stories have an irresistible charm about them.
I'm gonna see if I'm still sane enough to work a little on my side story tonight. Heh! I'm not sane at all.
LUV's from Khaos