for The Captive9/25/2011 c1 sell
Hello,I'am Sell,i don't speak/writter inglish, so translate portuguese in Google, not spanish,ok?.
Estou lendo suas fics só agora porque você postou uma história recente,então resolvi ler suas outras obras.Desculpe pelo atraso de três anos.Estou gostando muito. É legal ver o ponto de vista de Eames em suas fics.Amo Bobby e ele é meu protagonista absoluto,mas gosto quando Eames também leva o 'peso' desta complicada relação.A maioria dos outros fics colocam tudo nos ombros de Bobby e Eames ficava meio passiva na questão. Voê faz a coisa ficar mais equilibrada. Muito legal! Por favor, continue a escrever mais,só que histórias mais longas sim, afinal, só vocês é que podem manter CI vivo para seus fãs!
Hello,I'am Sell,i don't speak/writter inglish, so translate portuguese in Google, not spanish,ok?.
Estou lendo suas fics só agora porque você postou uma história recente,então resolvi ler suas outras obras.Desculpe pelo atraso de três anos.Estou gostando muito. É legal ver o ponto de vista de Eames em suas fics.Amo Bobby e ele é meu protagonista absoluto,mas gosto quando Eames também leva o 'peso' desta complicada relação.A maioria dos outros fics colocam tudo nos ombros de Bobby e Eames ficava meio passiva na questão. Voê faz a coisa ficar mais equilibrada. Muito legal! Por favor, continue a escrever mais,só que histórias mais longas sim, afinal, só vocês é que podem manter CI vivo para seus fãs!
11/16/2008 c1 
84Miss Mila
Wow. That about sums it up. I fell in love with this story as soon as I read it. You had the characters nailed down perfectly, and I bet that these thoughts went through their heads at one point. I love the "time bomb" thing.
Seriously though, the writers need to read this and take a hint.
I loved it, please write more soon,
~Mila
84Miss MilaWow. That about sums it up. I fell in love with this story as soon as I read it. You had the characters nailed down perfectly, and I bet that these thoughts went through their heads at one point. I love the "time bomb" thing.
Seriously though, the writers need to read this and take a hint.
I loved it, please write more soon,
~Mila
11/16/2008 c1 Ewelyn1
Well done. Very good description of emotions. I like the idea that Eames knows what feelings has Bobby for her and how she deals with it. Also liked the article "Unfortunately “never” ..." using the word "somebody", it gives the idea of Alex feeling numbed for a while after she realized her emotions.
Well done. Very good description of emotions. I like the idea that Eames knows what feelings has Bobby for her and how she deals with it. Also liked the article "Unfortunately “never” ..." using the word "somebody", it gives the idea of Alex feeling numbed for a while after she realized her emotions.
11/16/2008 c1 95InfinityStar
Six hours, eh? We all know that 'never' doesn't exist. Never say never, but never say always either. Life is a tender mix of almost always and seldom never. Their relationship is a complicated slurry of soft and hard, a maelstrom of powerful emotion that runs the gamut from a gale of fury to a whisper of affection. It's nearly impossible to stick a tack in, but you managed to capture that moment in time, and then you let it go to finish running its course. Nice job.
95InfinityStarSix hours, eh? We all know that 'never' doesn't exist. Never say never, but never say always either. Life is a tender mix of almost always and seldom never. Their relationship is a complicated slurry of soft and hard, a maelstrom of powerful emotion that runs the gamut from a gale of fury to a whisper of affection. It's nearly impossible to stick a tack in, but you managed to capture that moment in time, and then you let it go to finish running its course. Nice job.
11/16/2008 c1 9justanotherfic
OMG, I absolutely love it! You've managed to sort out every jumbled thought I have regarding this episode and their feelings for one another. This is just wonderfully done! Thanks for posting. I shall go re-read now. :)
9justanotherficOMG, I absolutely love it! You've managed to sort out every jumbled thought I have regarding this episode and their feelings for one another. This is just wonderfully done! Thanks for posting. I shall go re-read now. :)