for Mistake11/18/2009 c5 clare
hey, i love this story it actually made me think that daniel was doing all that stuff it was hilarious please do a sequal it would make me and other people very happy bunnies lol :)
hey, i love this story it actually made me think that daniel was doing all that stuff it was hilarious please do a sequal it would make me and other people very happy bunnies lol :)
12/1/2008 c5 
48Jacal Ste. Worme
“I love you too” he replied to himself.
Hhahaha, patheticm Daniel. Hehehe.
Good job! Update soon!
48Jacal Ste. Worme“I love you too” he replied to himself.
Hhahaha, patheticm Daniel. Hehehe.
Good job! Update soon!
12/1/2008 c5 Lisa
Very good. Well written. I know a lot of people like those little endings with a was-going-to-say-something-but-didn't moments, but I REALLY would have prefered a little picture perfect ending. Then again, that's just me.
Very good. Well written. I know a lot of people like those little endings with a was-going-to-say-something-but-didn't moments, but I REALLY would have prefered a little picture perfect ending. Then again, that's just me.
12/1/2008 c5 didi6
Great storie, whrite soon!
Daniel and Betty belong together!
You should whrite a sequel PLEASE!
Great storie, whrite soon!
Daniel and Betty belong together!
You should whrite a sequel PLEASE!
12/1/2008 c5 5AndromedaAiken
You could write an epilogue where Daniel finally tells Betty he loves her...as he hasn't in this chapter yet. We all know he will though. =) Great job!
5AndromedaAikenYou could write an epilogue where Daniel finally tells Betty he loves her...as he hasn't in this chapter yet. We all know he will though. =) Great job!
12/1/2008 c5 3Historianic
Ok. I really liked the ending :) I didn't quite love it, but I really liked it. It seemed to match the whole whimsical nature with which you wrote the fic. I would like a sequel however, simply because it just feels as though we've been left a little half way. And while Daniel is evidently an actions-speak-louder-than-words kind of guy, there still seem to be a few loose ends not quite tied up. It might just be me, but it feels as though there's still a little plot unresolved here. On a slightly different note, I found Daniel having a confidante in Claire a little out of character seeing as he doesn't find it easy to open up to people, and certainly not women. But in terms of the world of the fic and need to advance the plot, I get why it was written, so can suspend my belief for a moment ;) All in all, I really enjoyed reading this fic and hope to see more Detty fics from you in the near future. So thanks a bunch for a fun read and I hope your mocks are going well :) Thanks.
3HistorianicOk. I really liked the ending :) I didn't quite love it, but I really liked it. It seemed to match the whole whimsical nature with which you wrote the fic. I would like a sequel however, simply because it just feels as though we've been left a little half way. And while Daniel is evidently an actions-speak-louder-than-words kind of guy, there still seem to be a few loose ends not quite tied up. It might just be me, but it feels as though there's still a little plot unresolved here. On a slightly different note, I found Daniel having a confidante in Claire a little out of character seeing as he doesn't find it easy to open up to people, and certainly not women. But in terms of the world of the fic and need to advance the plot, I get why it was written, so can suspend my belief for a moment ;) All in all, I really enjoyed reading this fic and hope to see more Detty fics from you in the near future. So thanks a bunch for a fun read and I hope your mocks are going well :) Thanks.
11/30/2008 c5 abovetherim
AW that was adorable I LOVED that ending! Especially that last line “I love you too” he replied to himself." Definetely do a sequel please!
AW that was adorable I LOVED that ending! Especially that last line “I love you too” he replied to himself." Definetely do a sequel please!
11/30/2008 c5 33TeeFly
I LOVED IT! Thought it was freakin' amazing! Yep...I like that you ended there, leave it up to our imagination what happened next...in my mind of course they live Dettily ever after...can't wait to read more of your stuff!
33TeeFlyI LOVED IT! Thought it was freakin' amazing! Yep...I like that you ended there, leave it up to our imagination what happened next...in my mind of course they live Dettily ever after...can't wait to read more of your stuff!
11/30/2008 c5 Norey
I love the story, but I wish that it continued a little more about Betty and Daniel's friendship now that they have had their first kiss(es) and their relationship. But overall I am glad that Daniel was still a nice guy, just confused.
I love the story, but I wish that it continued a little more about Betty and Daniel's friendship now that they have had their first kiss(es) and their relationship. But overall I am glad that Daniel was still a nice guy, just confused.