for Mistake11/20/2008 c3 
3Historianic
This totally ROCKS! Betty was absolutely FANTASTIC! She stood her ground, called Daniel out on his crap and put him right back in his place. And she was telling the truth through all of it; no exaggeration whatsoever. Brilliant! Go Betty! And trust Daniel to become aroused by a fight lol! I liked the little bit of intrigue you threw in at the end there. All in all, a wonderfully written, fantastic to read chapter! Good on you! Update asap please! I can't wait for more! Thanks :)
3HistorianicThis totally ROCKS! Betty was absolutely FANTASTIC! She stood her ground, called Daniel out on his crap and put him right back in his place. And she was telling the truth through all of it; no exaggeration whatsoever. Brilliant! Go Betty! And trust Daniel to become aroused by a fight lol! I liked the little bit of intrigue you threw in at the end there. All in all, a wonderfully written, fantastic to read chapter! Good on you! Update asap please! I can't wait for more! Thanks :)
11/18/2008 c2 7LunaSolTierra
You have got to make spitfire Betty from Queens come out during the confrontation. I just hate it when the girl gets all wimpy and whiny. Betty is very strong so you should make her give Daniel a piece of her mind. This fic can go in a lot of different ways, I don't want Betty to change but if she does and Daniel acts interested about her she should be disappointed and turn him down until he learns to love her for her, or maybe Betty decides that instead of pining after Daniel she's going to try to move on with her life and then Daniel get's jealous, but that card has play before and sound a bit immature. But if you still write it that way I will still read it. I hate it when people walk all over her but what ever you decide please try to make Betty a tough person to beat down.
7LunaSolTierraYou have got to make spitfire Betty from Queens come out during the confrontation. I just hate it when the girl gets all wimpy and whiny. Betty is very strong so you should make her give Daniel a piece of her mind. This fic can go in a lot of different ways, I don't want Betty to change but if she does and Daniel acts interested about her she should be disappointed and turn him down until he learns to love her for her, or maybe Betty decides that instead of pining after Daniel she's going to try to move on with her life and then Daniel get's jealous, but that card has play before and sound a bit immature. But if you still write it that way I will still read it. I hate it when people walk all over her but what ever you decide please try to make Betty a tough person to beat down.
11/18/2008 c2 jackforpresident
hi hi hi hi
aw poor betty :(
its good! glad you worked out how to upload :P i tried to find you today but to no availl...
love ya
x
hi hi hi hi
aw poor betty :(
its good! glad you worked out how to upload :P i tried to find you today but to no availl...
love ya
x
11/18/2008 c2 37englishstudent01
countiue please I want to Betty to slap the living shit out of Daniel
37englishstudent01countiue please I want to Betty to slap the living shit out of Daniel
11/18/2008 c2 3Historianic
I have to say you got Christina's character spot on in this! She was a lot of fun to read. And now you've got us heading for the big Detty confrontation. I'm begging you to please, please, please let Betty be strong and come out on top during their confrontation. Please don't make her all weepy and simpering. At this stage, Daniel doesn't deserve to see Betty cry and he doesn't deserve to comfort her either. Betty needs to get her mad on and kick his ass! I love Daniel and I love Daniel with Betty, but at this point, he's asking for it! lol! By the way I am loving the speedy update and really glad to see you continuing this. Updates please! Thanks.
3HistorianicI have to say you got Christina's character spot on in this! She was a lot of fun to read. And now you've got us heading for the big Detty confrontation. I'm begging you to please, please, please let Betty be strong and come out on top during their confrontation. Please don't make her all weepy and simpering. At this stage, Daniel doesn't deserve to see Betty cry and he doesn't deserve to comfort her either. Betty needs to get her mad on and kick his ass! I love Daniel and I love Daniel with Betty, but at this point, he's asking for it! lol! By the way I am loving the speedy update and really glad to see you continuing this. Updates please! Thanks.
11/18/2008 c2 Sung Ho
wow that was an amazing chapter, keep it up!
wow that was an amazing chapter, keep it up!
11/18/2008 c2 abovetherim
WOW WOW definetly continue I can't wait to see what happens when Daniel comes into the closet! I love Christina she gives great advice and she is hilarious! Great Job!
WOW WOW definetly continue I can't wait to see what happens when Daniel comes into the closet! I love Christina she gives great advice and she is hilarious! Great Job!