for GateWars: StarFire4/2/2012 c5 
4Dur'id the Druid
Ok, I started reading this because the sequak looked interesting. And your writing is good, but the plotholes, logic errors, and wilkful ignorance of what people are actually capable of just so you can bring people together in this story for dramatic scenes... Well, you ever hear the phrase 'jump the shark'. You have done that several times in the first five chapters alone.
4Dur'id the DruidOk, I started reading this because the sequak looked interesting. And your writing is good, but the plotholes, logic errors, and wilkful ignorance of what people are actually capable of just so you can bring people together in this story for dramatic scenes... Well, you ever hear the phrase 'jump the shark'. You have done that several times in the first five chapters alone.
4/6/2011 c9 2o0Aurie0o
Hello everyone! I actually am the co-author of this story, and just recently have been introduced to Fanfiction. In any case... To those Stargate fans out there, I apologize for my ineptitude when we first wrote this story: SG-1 isn't getting enough action, and I realize that. However, like Rane said, we have some... plans for our next two, which will knock Starfire right out of the water. Hope you guys enjoy! :)
2o0Aurie0oHello everyone! I actually am the co-author of this story, and just recently have been introduced to Fanfiction. In any case... To those Stargate fans out there, I apologize for my ineptitude when we first wrote this story: SG-1 isn't getting enough action, and I realize that. However, like Rane said, we have some... plans for our next two, which will knock Starfire right out of the water. Hope you guys enjoy! :)
5/19/2009 c8 17Lora Kael
What a way to go... I'd suggest she say something, but I suspect the SGC will not trust her anyway.
The memories were well written. :)
Love Lora
17Lora KaelWhat a way to go... I'd suggest she say something, but I suspect the SGC will not trust her anyway.
The memories were well written. :)
Love Lora
5/18/2009 c8 GateRider
Okay... not something I would expect. A Sith all of a sudden giving up the dark Side just because she saw her sister. Then again she was probably traumatized, so yeah.
Anyway, where's SG-1! You need to let them in on the fun! Don't let the Jedi hog all of it! No offense, if you're a complete Jedi fan.
Okay... not something I would expect. A Sith all of a sudden giving up the dark Side just because she saw her sister. Then again she was probably traumatized, so yeah.
Anyway, where's SG-1! You need to let them in on the fun! Don't let the Jedi hog all of it! No offense, if you're a complete Jedi fan.
5/17/2009 c7 Lora Kael
he he, drama. Twins? Or just sisters? I suspect next chapter will reveal it.
Love Lora
he he, drama. Twins? Or just sisters? I suspect next chapter will reveal it.
Love Lora
5/16/2009 c7 GateRider
WHOA! This chapter is awesome! Rane's probably Aurora's twin sister. But then why am I stating the obvious? ANyway it's good, but it seems like you're leaving SG-1 out of this! Come on, you need to have SG-1 to have some action!
Then again, it's not my story. Oh well, just make it good alright?
WHOA! This chapter is awesome! Rane's probably Aurora's twin sister. But then why am I stating the obvious? ANyway it's good, but it seems like you're leaving SG-1 out of this! Come on, you need to have SG-1 to have some action!
Then again, it's not my story. Oh well, just make it good alright?
5/15/2009 c5 Lora Kael
Hmm, weird crossover, but interesting enough. :)
This is an AU timeline you have made to use in your stories or just something used for this story?
Love Lora
Hmm, weird crossover, but interesting enough. :)
This is an AU timeline you have made to use in your stories or just something used for this story?
Love Lora
1/22/2009 c3 GateRider
Interesting! I wonder how the encounter will turn out! Ooh, the suspense!
Interesting! I wonder how the encounter will turn out! Ooh, the suspense!
1/2/2009 c1 GateRider
Man, this is awesome! I wonder when the Jedi are going to meet SG-1.
Man, this is awesome! I wonder when the Jedi are going to meet SG-1.
11/24/2008 c2 Fylishia-Jacklyn
Beautiful stoy, really easy to get stuck inside of! I give it a 10 out of 10!
Beautiful stoy, really easy to get stuck inside of! I give it a 10 out of 10!