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58/4/2012 c59 blind-saint
Great story! It's amazing how things are developing. Very, very interesting story to read. Gotta love the action!
Update soon!
Great story! It's amazing how things are developing. Very, very interesting story to read. Gotta love the action!
Update soon!
5/10/2011 c6 Blumenkasten
I like that he is a real meanie. It's so much more like him than all the other fanfics which show him as some romantic hero with a soft core. snape is just not nice and thats good :)
I like that he is a real meanie. It's so much more like him than all the other fanfics which show him as some romantic hero with a soft core. snape is just not nice and thats good :)
5/10/2011 c2 Blumenkasten
great chapter. I love detailed and not too fast beginnings. you have time to get to know the characters and to get acquainted with the writing style and plot line :)
great chapter. I love detailed and not too fast beginnings. you have time to get to know the characters and to get acquainted with the writing style and plot line :)
5/10/2011 c1 Blumenkasten
sooo... after finishing this amazing story, I'll start the huge project of reviewing each chapter. Unfortunately it was such a good read that I couldn't stop between the chapters and rewview.
poor me... 57 reviews to go...
sooo... after finishing this amazing story, I'll start the huge project of reviewing each chapter. Unfortunately it was such a good read that I couldn't stop between the chapters and rewview.
poor me... 57 reviews to go...
4/7/2011 c58 Blumenkasten
This has been a truly great story so far.
I love how you developed characters with so many layers of personality and at the same time don't change them much from how Rowling depicted them. I like that Snape isn't one of those romantic softies like in so many other storys on fanfiction...
I also apreciate that you create a storyline which isn't shallow, predictable and without any sideplots. I love to read stories, that don't focus on getting it finally finished. It's nice to have some extras, and parts which don't push the action forwards and with that give me time to process the important parts I read recently, or simply enjoy the characters.
If your story was a book, I would buy the special edition :) Keep writing, please!
(I'm sorry for possible strange wording, as well as spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm not from an english-speaking country)
This has been a truly great story so far.
I love how you developed characters with so many layers of personality and at the same time don't change them much from how Rowling depicted them. I like that Snape isn't one of those romantic softies like in so many other storys on fanfiction...
I also apreciate that you create a storyline which isn't shallow, predictable and without any sideplots. I love to read stories, that don't focus on getting it finally finished. It's nice to have some extras, and parts which don't push the action forwards and with that give me time to process the important parts I read recently, or simply enjoy the characters.
If your story was a book, I would buy the special edition :) Keep writing, please!
(I'm sorry for possible strange wording, as well as spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm not from an english-speaking country)