for When the Hunter Becomes the Prey4/19 c1 ArtemisHermes
I love it!
Please continue and update, I love Artemis and Hermes sosososo much! 3
I love it!
Please continue and update, I love Artemis and Hermes sosososo much! 3
4/18 c1 Scathach
I soo love your story! It's a amzing and you have a really great writing style!
Artemis and Hermes are one of my favourite pairings within greek mythology 3 please stick with them and forget her stupid virginity oath or find some way to overcome it!
Update soon!
Love,
Scathach
PS: Update your athenaares ff as well please! ;)
I soo love your story! It's a amzing and you have a really great writing style!
Artemis and Hermes are one of my favourite pairings within greek mythology 3 please stick with them and forget her stupid virginity oath or find some way to overcome it!
Update soon!
Love,
Scathach
PS: Update your athenaares ff as well please! ;)
2/1 c1 Guest
I love your story. IT takes forever to find a Hermes and Artemis story. :)
I love your story. IT takes forever to find a Hermes and Artemis story. :)
11/19/2012 c8 Guest
I think you should try to write some original stories. Send them to a publisher! You may meet success! If you don't... oh well... you tried. But if you put them on Fiction Press first a publisher is less likely to pick it up.
I think you should try to write some original stories. Send them to a publisher! You may meet success! If you don't... oh well... you tried. But if you put them on Fiction Press first a publisher is less likely to pick it up.
11/19/2012 c5 Guest
Did Artemis not take a vow of eternal virginity? And Athena as well?
Did Artemis not take a vow of eternal virginity? And Athena as well?
10/12/2012 c9 
17cerberus angel
Now this chapter brought the fic to a whole other level! We know how Artemis feels because we see through her eyes and because of that I am able to really like her. She's genuinely a good Goddess. But the end when you showed us Hermes thoughts I was awestruck. I knew I liked him, but now I feel that my my sentiments toward him have more ground. Artemis is no longer the only struggling with her feelings now that Hermes has discovered his. I am so hoping you give us more of Hermes POV. :)
17cerberus angelNow this chapter brought the fic to a whole other level! We know how Artemis feels because we see through her eyes and because of that I am able to really like her. She's genuinely a good Goddess. But the end when you showed us Hermes thoughts I was awestruck. I knew I liked him, but now I feel that my my sentiments toward him have more ground. Artemis is no longer the only struggling with her feelings now that Hermes has discovered his. I am so hoping you give us more of Hermes POV. :)
10/12/2012 c8 cerberus angel
Oh how you kill me with this suspense! xD While reading the beginning I couldn't help but feel that Hermes has his work cut out for him. I could understand why Artemis felt a lack of something in the kiss. Something tells me that Hermes will have to prove how much she means to him.
Oh how you kill me with this suspense! xD While reading the beginning I couldn't help but feel that Hermes has his work cut out for him. I could understand why Artemis felt a lack of something in the kiss. Something tells me that Hermes will have to prove how much she means to him.
10/12/2012 c7 cerberus angel
I finally am able to return to this wonderful fic and am reminded just how much I adore your writing. :D I can't believe he actually kissed her! I'm grinning like a fool now lol. I can't wait to see how Artemis will react to this turn of event. :)
I finally am able to return to this wonderful fic and am reminded just how much I adore your writing. :D I can't believe he actually kissed her! I'm grinning like a fool now lol. I can't wait to see how Artemis will react to this turn of event. :)
8/9/2012 c6 cerberus angel
Oh so now I get what happened in chapter 3. I did enjoy seeing Apollo and then Athena (who I don't know what to make of her yet except that I really like her. She's funny in her own way). Not mention the implication of AthenaxAres. And now I'm starting to see more of the sparks between Artemis and Apollo, which I'm really excited for! :D
Oh so now I get what happened in chapter 3. I did enjoy seeing Apollo and then Athena (who I don't know what to make of her yet except that I really like her. She's funny in her own way). Not mention the implication of AthenaxAres. And now I'm starting to see more of the sparks between Artemis and Apollo, which I'm really excited for! :D
8/9/2012 c5 cerberus angel
My heart goes to Artemis. I can only hope that Hermes turns out to be that person she longs by her side, to be there for her. And Hephaestus had me smiling. You have no idea how happy I got to see him in this fic and I so wanted to hug him when he smiled after Artemis said she loved the bow he made. :)
My heart goes to Artemis. I can only hope that Hermes turns out to be that person she longs by her side, to be there for her. And Hephaestus had me smiling. You have no idea how happy I got to see him in this fic and I so wanted to hug him when he smiled after Artemis said she loved the bow he made. :)
8/9/2012 c4 cerberus angel
lol Oh Hermes leave it to you to be stubborn. I don't know why but I can imagine them being childhood friends. Maybe it's because of the way they act with each other. :)
lol Oh Hermes leave it to you to be stubborn. I don't know why but I can imagine them being childhood friends. Maybe it's because of the way they act with each other. :)
8/9/2012 c3 cerberus angel
Hmmm...is this going from the present to the past? Have Artemis and Hermes all ready gone out or is he simply giving her mixed signals that she just doesn't really know what to do and the only way to cope is by slowly stop caring? Okay now I must continue reading!
Hmmm...is this going from the present to the past? Have Artemis and Hermes all ready gone out or is he simply giving her mixed signals that she just doesn't really know what to do and the only way to cope is by slowly stop caring? Okay now I must continue reading!
8/9/2012 c2 cerberus angel
lol Hmm I am highly amused by the dynamic between them. If I didn't know better I would think Hermes is a tease although I must say that I loved his intro and Artemis seems to have a hint of feisty in her. Can't wait to continue reading. :)
lol Hmm I am highly amused by the dynamic between them. If I didn't know better I would think Hermes is a tease although I must say that I loved his intro and Artemis seems to have a hint of feisty in her. Can't wait to continue reading. :)