for Love in an elevator5/18 c8 Lucy112358
U could end this at any time and yet you keep on leading us on and making it interesting. I like that.
U could end this at any time and yet you keep on leading us on and making it interesting. I like that.
4/27 c1 
5Sorceress Rinoa Heartilly
Hi there! As you said this was your first time writing like this, this is also my first time reading something like this and I want to tell you something, you really got talent there! It was incredible, I have never read something so well described, I could almost see the whole scene, it was also kind of poetic, very artistic, that's really a talent.
I haven't read the rest, I'm kind of a busy girl, but I'll definitively try to read the whole story. See ya!
-Sorceress Rinoa Heartilly
5Sorceress Rinoa HeartillyHi there! As you said this was your first time writing like this, this is also my first time reading something like this and I want to tell you something, you really got talent there! It was incredible, I have never read something so well described, I could almost see the whole scene, it was also kind of poetic, very artistic, that's really a talent.
I haven't read the rest, I'm kind of a busy girl, but I'll definitively try to read the whole story. See ya!
-Sorceress Rinoa Heartilly
4/19 c21 Guest
yah
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4/19 c20 Guest
what is wrong with you the op of the chapter was find why did the end of the chapter was like that
what is wrong with you the op of the chapter was find why did the end of the chapter was like that
4/5 c15 Sprinkles
Well, I've been reading this fic for a while, and while I started of skeptical ( May or ,ay not have hated it), I find that it is really a good fic. Just saying, the reason I thought that is probably because I have started a habit of reading from 11-2 in the morning, and ill probably sound drink while writing this. Though I haven't ever been drunk, which is good, I think...?
Any who, just want to say you've done an excellent job, this coming from someone who is normally displeased with published works. A few pet peeves;
Yuuki seems kind of ooc, just because of the excessive swearing.(eh, oh well)
Also, I found a fair few simple grammar/spelling mistakes, but that is in ever story. ( Even published ones)
I think I may try and finish it all tonight... I may legitimately fall asleep..
Also, not re reading this whatsoever, so sorry for the tired ramblings. Also, writing this on an ipad, so probably a lot of little mistakes.
Also, the development is good, and something I would have never thought of. I am pleased with the light-heartedness. Very pleased. I have waisted a precious 5 minutes of reading time! Must reeaaaaaad! ZZzZzZzZzZ- Must... Read...
Well, I've been reading this fic for a while, and while I started of skeptical ( May or ,ay not have hated it), I find that it is really a good fic. Just saying, the reason I thought that is probably because I have started a habit of reading from 11-2 in the morning, and ill probably sound drink while writing this. Though I haven't ever been drunk, which is good, I think...?
Any who, just want to say you've done an excellent job, this coming from someone who is normally displeased with published works. A few pet peeves;
Yuuki seems kind of ooc, just because of the excessive swearing.(eh, oh well)
Also, I found a fair few simple grammar/spelling mistakes, but that is in ever story. ( Even published ones)
I think I may try and finish it all tonight... I may legitimately fall asleep..
Also, not re reading this whatsoever, so sorry for the tired ramblings. Also, writing this on an ipad, so probably a lot of little mistakes.
Also, the development is good, and something I would have never thought of. I am pleased with the light-heartedness. Very pleased. I have waisted a precious 5 minutes of reading time! Must reeaaaaaad! ZZzZzZzZzZ- Must... Read...
4/5 c22 yuuki
Awww... it's so nice I wish It could continue!
Awww... it's so nice I wish It could continue!
3/27 c2 Icephoenix321
Sorry, but...this back story is incredibly unrealistic. I think Yuuki would have been a little more curious about the night class. I'm also pretty sure that Kaname would have found a way to meet and connect with Yuuki. After all he is a vampire and he loves her. But this is just my opinion. It doesn't really matter what I think in the whole of things.
Sorry, but...this back story is incredibly unrealistic. I think Yuuki would have been a little more curious about the night class. I'm also pretty sure that Kaname would have found a way to meet and connect with Yuuki. After all he is a vampire and he loves her. But this is just my opinion. It doesn't really matter what I think in the whole of things.
3/9 c6 Guest
SARA YOU BIIIIIIITTTTTTTCCCCH!
SARA YOU BIIIIIIITTTTTTTCCCCH!
2/16 c22 Guest
Bueno yo solo tengo una cosa que decir: ¡Sos una geniaaaaa! Tenes una imaginacion de otro mundo así que te felicito de verdad
Bueno yo solo tengo una cosa que decir: ¡Sos una geniaaaaa! Tenes una imaginacion de otro mundo así que te felicito de verdad
2/13 c1 CandyGiirL12
Oh, I had some obstacles because the fic is written in English and I have not practice my English (I am Mexican) overall I liked the story, the first chapter and wow! really got me ... completely fascinated me. Your story has motivated me to practice my English more! I will not miss this story as language barriers nyaan Greetings and is doing a good job as always (Y)
Oh, I had some obstacles because the fic is written in English and I have not practice my English (I am Mexican) overall I liked the story, the first chapter and wow! really got me ... completely fascinated me. Your story has motivated me to practice my English more! I will not miss this story as language barriers nyaan Greetings and is doing a good job as always (Y)
1/3 c4 Kokoa nii-san
OMG! I Really love this story.. and i think Kaname is cute when he's Jealous! XDD
OMG! I Really love this story.. and i think Kaname is cute when he's Jealous! XDD
11/27/2012 c22 gjfnchh
everyone was very OOC, i itbecause curiosity gotthe better off me. and I needed to read through. yuuki disappearing was kindof expected , her being the new pureblood aswell. find it a shame that ruka went unpunished, also that u tossed yori out like - don'tneed you anymore buhnaiii
everyone was very OOC, i itbecause curiosity gotthe better off me. and I needed to read through. yuuki disappearing was kindof expected , her being the new pureblood aswell. find it a shame that ruka went unpunished, also that u tossed yori out like - don'tneed you anymore buhnaiii
11/15/2012 c7 Yuuki Kuran
Have Kaname Dump that ** Sara! she is so not worth it! she is urg!
Have Kaname Dump that ** Sara! she is so not worth it! she is urg!