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12/26/2008 c3 Liz86000
Great fic...
12/3/2008 c3 5Guitar Hero
Wow that was a really sweet story. By your writing, i can tell you don't like Chris. You may not like him but my hate for him runs very deep. Like to my blood deep.
12/1/2008 c3 8I love Lukey
Hi Boom!

Wow! Touching story.

I really liked how Luke was there for Lorelai when she needed him. It was completely Luke-like to tell her that he wouldn't play second fiddle. (He has such self-control.)

I also liked that he came to her house, made it more romantic (also, closer to the bedroom!)He was so sweet and insecure, I love the way you played that.

Then, pitter patter goes my heart, he said he wanted to "make love". Awsome job at intimacy. Loved it!
11/28/2008 c3 Jeremy Shane
good chapter & more please
11/28/2008 c1 Jeremy Shane
good chapter
11/28/2008 c3 micyaya
Well done! Nothing like a L & L tid bit! Thanks

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