for Love does Damage, a Lot of Damage10/26/2012 c22 Guest
niceeeeeeee make it longer
niceeeeeeee make it longer
5/10/2009 c22 
10chibi3000
Wait a minute. I thought billy said that they have to offer the treasures at may 18 not may 16. Anyway, continue writing and I look forward to more stories
10chibi3000Wait a minute. I thought billy said that they have to offer the treasures at may 18 not may 16. Anyway, continue writing and I look forward to more stories
3/4/2009 c22 12ShadowRose18
Ahaha! I loved that
Very nice ending
Yay! The A.O.'s became the A.O.'s! XD
Well, at least they changed to the side of good, but the chances of ALL of the A.O.'s changing just like that is unlikely, but oh well!
Great job Jenni!
Write another story soon! :P
12ShadowRose18Ahaha! I loved that
Very nice ending
Yay! The A.O.'s became the A.O.'s! XD
Well, at least they changed to the side of good, but the chances of ALL of the A.O.'s changing just like that is unlikely, but oh well!
Great job Jenni!
Write another story soon! :P
3/4/2009 c21 ShadowRose18
OMG! Now I get why you named it Love does Damage, a Lot of Damage! I GET IT! XD
Anyway, if you hadn't revived Billy, I wouldn't be cursing at you right now XD but you did! And Tancred's alive again! :D
If I was Em, even if I was embarrassed, I wouldn't have let go XD I mean, its not every day that your love comes back to life! Honestly!
Anyway, EPILOGUE FOR ME! XD
Great job on this Jenni! All those things finally make sense now and you kept us hanging :P
One thing I'd say about this chapter, is that during the battle scene it went a LITTLE too fast. Like, one sentence someone is standing and fighting, the next, they're on the ground half dead or something. Don't forget to add a little detail now and again.
Actually, I shouldn't be critising you... I haven't even written a action scene yet... And I'd probably do a worse job than you .
Ignore me...
Anyway, EPILOGUE TIME! :D
OMG! Now I get why you named it Love does Damage, a Lot of Damage! I GET IT! XD
Anyway, if you hadn't revived Billy, I wouldn't be cursing at you right now XD but you did! And Tancred's alive again! :D
If I was Em, even if I was embarrassed, I wouldn't have let go XD I mean, its not every day that your love comes back to life! Honestly!
Anyway, EPILOGUE FOR ME! XD
Great job on this Jenni! All those things finally make sense now and you kept us hanging :P
One thing I'd say about this chapter, is that during the battle scene it went a LITTLE too fast. Like, one sentence someone is standing and fighting, the next, they're on the ground half dead or something. Don't forget to add a little detail now and again.
Actually, I shouldn't be critising you... I haven't even written a action scene yet... And I'd probably do a worse job than you .
Ignore me...
Anyway, EPILOGUE TIME! :D
3/4/2009 c22 FizzCracklePOP
HAHAHAHA...that was great! xD LOVE how you made the last sentence the title...perfect! This has been a FANTASTIC story, GREAT JOB! *bows down to author*
You totally deserve that! WELL DONE!
HAHAHAHA...that was great! xD LOVE how you made the last sentence the title...perfect! This has been a FANTASTIC story, GREAT JOB! *bows down to author*
You totally deserve that! WELL DONE!
3/3/2009 c20 ShadowRose18
Woot! Go Ben :P
Hehe, I liked the secretive start to the plan, with the walkie talkies and stuff XD
Mep
EBIL PPL! *rushes in with a wooden sword* HIYA! *is hit* DX
Go Billy! Save everyone with your little mouse! XD
LIVVIE! *glomp* Glad to have you back :3
Oh oh oh oh! SNEAK ATTACK :3
Update soon Jenni, 'cause this is getting awesome
Remember! Revive Tancred :P
Woot! Go Ben :P
Hehe, I liked the secretive start to the plan, with the walkie talkies and stuff XD
Mep
EBIL PPL! *rushes in with a wooden sword* HIYA! *is hit* DX
Go Billy! Save everyone with your little mouse! XD
LIVVIE! *glomp* Glad to have you back :3
Oh oh oh oh! SNEAK ATTACK :3
Update soon Jenni, 'cause this is getting awesome
Remember! Revive Tancred :P
3/3/2009 c19 ShadowRose18
*hisses at Miss Gosten*
EBIL WOMAN! *steals poodle and puts it in another home*
Don't you DARE tell Lysander to drink his own saliva! *kick*
Now I feel better XDD
Yikes... Very interesting way to get Olivia... pin her down... woot... How did Paton manage to carry all four girls? O_O
Hehe! Go Una!
Lol, 'Father son rivalry?' XDD Go Mr. Taxi-man! XD
Cook's message was a little strange, but it was cool the way it was delivered :P
LOVED the last line. XDD
But I bet Em keeps her room clean, she's the kind I guess. XD
But then again, people say I'm the kind to keep a clean room and my room looks a whole farm of animals ran through it and had a party. Even after I "clean" it *sigh*
Next chapter for me! :)
*hisses at Miss Gosten*
EBIL WOMAN! *steals poodle and puts it in another home*
Don't you DARE tell Lysander to drink his own saliva! *kick*
Now I feel better XDD
Yikes... Very interesting way to get Olivia... pin her down... woot... How did Paton manage to carry all four girls? O_O
Hehe! Go Una!
Lol, 'Father son rivalry?' XDD Go Mr. Taxi-man! XD
Cook's message was a little strange, but it was cool the way it was delivered :P
LOVED the last line. XDD
But I bet Em keeps her room clean, she's the kind I guess. XD
But then again, people say I'm the kind to keep a clean room and my room looks a whole farm of animals ran through it and had a party. Even after I "clean" it *sigh*
Next chapter for me! :)
3/2/2009 c18 FizzCracklePOP
Haha, Charlie just likes the food Julia makes! xD I was a little confused at the beginning because of all the different sub-headings, but I sorted it out with my brain :) That's also a pretty effective way of keeping everybody 'hooked' on the story too, so good job! Update soon!
Haha, Charlie just likes the food Julia makes! xD I was a little confused at the beginning because of all the different sub-headings, but I sorted it out with my brain :) That's also a pretty effective way of keeping everybody 'hooked' on the story too, so good job! Update soon!
3/2/2009 c18 ShadowRose18
yeek, the A.O.'s are crepy
Egypt, heh
The mummy sitting up was creepy, but when it went back to sleep it was funny XD
I like Eln best, even if she did steal Charlie's moth *glare*, of all the A.O.'s
Ront and Gont sound weird...like... quarrelling siblings (which they are) that are just plain stupid in the head.
ANYWAY! Great job Jenni, but I have to get back to that homework I'm procrastinating on XD
Update soon ;)
yeek, the A.O.'s are crepy
Egypt, heh
The mummy sitting up was creepy, but when it went back to sleep it was funny XD
I like Eln best, even if she did steal Charlie's moth *glare*, of all the A.O.'s
Ront and Gont sound weird...like... quarrelling siblings (which they are) that are just plain stupid in the head.
ANYWAY! Great job Jenni, but I have to get back to that homework I'm procrastinating on XD
Update soon ;)
2/28/2009 c17 ShadowRose18
Whoa! When did Joshua, Idith and Inez join the good side? O_O I must have missed something...
Anyway, Charlie, you are one good planner, even if it is a little scary how you can think of a plan...
Gabriel can wield a sword? COOL! :D
Go Dannielle! Master those elements ^_~
Great job Jenni! Update soon ;D
Whoa! When did Joshua, Idith and Inez join the good side? O_O I must have missed something...
Anyway, Charlie, you are one good planner, even if it is a little scary how you can think of a plan...
Gabriel can wield a sword? COOL! :D
Go Dannielle! Master those elements ^_~
Great job Jenni! Update soon ;D