for 2142 Delta Force: Genesis2/5/2009 c6 Battlefieldfanaticlulz
YAY A NEW CHAPTER! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! Seriously! This has to be one of the most original Sci-Fi epics ever made! you should totally publish this in a book. I can't beleive John Connor's going to be in this! "What don't you fucking understand? Are you a professional or not?"
Is SkyNet going to be in this too? He should team up with the Hitler clone army. Then SkyNet should like take control of the Titans and use them to stomp on all of the Hitler clones and go after John Connor himself! Then they could have this totally epic battle! I smell Epicsause!
Then there could be like these trucks that fly off of a bridge or something into the titans and it'd be all like "KABLOOM!" and "KABLAMABOOM!" and as you can see I like to use onomatopoeias. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! :D
YAY A NEW CHAPTER! THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! Seriously! This has to be one of the most original Sci-Fi epics ever made! you should totally publish this in a book. I can't beleive John Connor's going to be in this! "What don't you fucking understand? Are you a professional or not?"
Is SkyNet going to be in this too? He should team up with the Hitler clone army. Then SkyNet should like take control of the Titans and use them to stomp on all of the Hitler clones and go after John Connor himself! Then they could have this totally epic battle! I smell Epicsause!
Then there could be like these trucks that fly off of a bridge or something into the titans and it'd be all like "KABLOOM!" and "KABLAMABOOM!" and as you can see I like to use onomatopoeias. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! :D
1/5/2009 c3 2girls1cup
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12/29/2008 c1 SuperDuper64
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12/27/2008 c1 Michaelsucks69
Wow, so original that it pours with overflowing cumming originality. I LOVE your use of Hitler. You know what, though? You should quit writing, quit wearing your class ring, and ... ... .. quit wearing your class ring. Seriously, lulwut.
You go down as an hero in my books.
Okay, here's my review.
Don't include America - don't include ice (lulwut), don't include words(seriously, a naked dance on video will suffice to tell the story), don't include hitler's name(smart idea), don't include nourishment [from condoms] lulwut, don't include men (only women), don't include war (include flowers), don't include resources (include lsd + flowers), don't include allied powers (red alert? lulwut)
Don't include greek signs like delta, unless you know what they mean. (let's just copy some shit I read in a book, or a movie). Don't include technology (go back to my flowers + lsd arguement) war is bad, only herbs and flowers will do. I'm NOT FUCKING KIDDING! lulz,
Moving on - Yeah 2142.. how .. RIPPED OFF!
Good vs Evil = RIPPED OFF
Heaven Vs Hell = are you MEXICAN or something?
Humanity vs. Animal instinct = Eh..
Srsly, this story is NOT for the lulz. I'm lulz deprived and I don't get any lulzy from this.
I reviewed the first sentence ^- The above review-^. I couldn't go through with the whole thing, it made me squeal in my pants for joy. To be honest, just change what I wrote you to change, and you can get it published. KAPISH!
Wow, so original that it pours with overflowing cumming originality. I LOVE your use of Hitler. You know what, though? You should quit writing, quit wearing your class ring, and ... ... .. quit wearing your class ring. Seriously, lulwut.
You go down as an hero in my books.
Okay, here's my review.
Don't include America - don't include ice (lulwut), don't include words(seriously, a naked dance on video will suffice to tell the story), don't include hitler's name(smart idea), don't include nourishment [from condoms] lulwut, don't include men (only women), don't include war (include flowers), don't include resources (include lsd + flowers), don't include allied powers (red alert? lulwut)
Don't include greek signs like delta, unless you know what they mean. (let's just copy some shit I read in a book, or a movie). Don't include technology (go back to my flowers + lsd arguement) war is bad, only herbs and flowers will do. I'm NOT FUCKING KIDDING! lulz,
Moving on - Yeah 2142.. how .. RIPPED OFF!
Good vs Evil = RIPPED OFF
Heaven Vs Hell = are you MEXICAN or something?
Humanity vs. Animal instinct = Eh..
Srsly, this story is NOT for the lulz. I'm lulz deprived and I don't get any lulzy from this.
I reviewed the first sentence ^- The above review-^. I couldn't go through with the whole thing, it made me squeal in my pants for joy. To be honest, just change what I wrote you to change, and you can get it published. KAPISH!
12/26/2008 c1 Battlefieldfanaticlulz
I really enjoyed this story. This has to be the best story I've ever read for Battlefield. Boy, I am impressed. The story is very well-put together and it makes me squirt in my pants with joy just reading it.
I have one question though. Are Hitlers prisoners the Jews? That idiot with the Charlie Chaplin mustache has got to stop trying to live forever!
I really enjoyed this story. This has to be the best story I've ever read for Battlefield. Boy, I am impressed. The story is very well-put together and it makes me squirt in my pants with joy just reading it.
I have one question though. Are Hitlers prisoners the Jews? That idiot with the Charlie Chaplin mustache has got to stop trying to live forever!