for Fighter of the Elements9/12/2010 c6 
1Amras Black-Fox
Interesting story.
Very good setting. he is powerful but not too powerful.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
1Amras Black-FoxInteresting story.
Very good setting. he is powerful but not too powerful.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
4/27/2010 c6 Kain129
need more gimmie more i want more GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE
Love Kain
need more gimmie more i want more GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE GIMMIE
Love Kain
4/22/2010 c2 DarcYen
i made it threw the first chapter loved it
started the second chapter and once naruto said "if we make it threw this ill answer any question you have" i stopped
my question is why why tell him he doesn't have to really tho why does he just up in volunteer the info nine times out of ten they get to the hokage and tell him to but i really want to no why it happens i a lot of stories and i want to no why
i made it threw the first chapter loved it
started the second chapter and once naruto said "if we make it threw this ill answer any question you have" i stopped
my question is why why tell him he doesn't have to really tho why does he just up in volunteer the info nine times out of ten they get to the hokage and tell him to but i really want to no why it happens i a lot of stories and i want to no why
3/8/2010 c6 1Kaiba1288
This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,
Good luck with this & any others you may write.
Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Peace & Jah Bless
Kaiba1288
1Kaiba1288This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,
Good luck with this & any others you may write.
Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Peace & Jah Bless
Kaiba1288
3/7/2010 c6 11Leaf Ranger
Heh heh heh. Naruto pawns. Most excellent.
Haku... and Hinata? *Faints from nosebleed*
Excellent chapter.
11Leaf RangerHeh heh heh. Naruto pawns. Most excellent.
Haku... and Hinata? *Faints from nosebleed*
Excellent chapter.
3/7/2010 c6 3Deathmvp
Good job on this chapter. I look foward to seeing how things go in the forest next.
3DeathmvpGood job on this chapter. I look foward to seeing how things go in the forest next.
3/7/2010 c6 1Dark Insomniacs
Good story I do have one question is ever female at the weddind a lesbian or just friends to of the couple.
1Dark InsomniacsGood story I do have one question is ever female at the weddind a lesbian or just friends to of the couple.
3/6/2010 c6 5RogueNya
Well given you say Naruto gets his payback in a few chapters right? Then he survives his battle with Orochi-teme lol...
Good job on the chapter, I actually had to go and Re-read the whole thing to get refreshed on what was going on in the story. But it all good, so keep up the great work, cannot wait to read more ^^
5RogueNyaWell given you say Naruto gets his payback in a few chapters right? Then he survives his battle with Orochi-teme lol...
Good job on the chapter, I actually had to go and Re-read the whole thing to get refreshed on what was going on in the story. But it all good, so keep up the great work, cannot wait to read more ^^