for How The Great Plains Stole Christmas4/12 c3 DQEnthusiast
"I'm not pregnant. What's yours say, Ziva?"
Ziva stared at the little stick before taking a deep breath.
...Aw come on. I think that would have been great if Jenny would have been the one pregnant when she wasn't expecting it. :)
"I'm not pregnant. What's yours say, Ziva?"
Ziva stared at the little stick before taking a deep breath.
...Aw come on. I think that would have been great if Jenny would have been the one pregnant when she wasn't expecting it. :)
2/16/2009 c5 
8quibilah
I laughed very hard at the mae prostitute part in the begining of the chapter. Very funny. I am glad that you had Kate get pregnant, she seemed like the mothering type in the show. I also like how you chose to end your series. Kepp up the good work!
8quibilahI laughed very hard at the mae prostitute part in the begining of the chapter. Very funny. I am glad that you had Kate get pregnant, she seemed like the mothering type in the show. I also like how you chose to end your series. Kepp up the good work!
2/16/2009 c3 quibilah
I hope that Ziva isnt pregnant. I mean dont get me wrong I would have her get pregnant, but not for a while. But hey I dont know maybe it would be cool to have a pregnant Ziva and see Tony's shock. I once again enjoyed this chapter and can not wait to get on to the next^^
I hope that Ziva isnt pregnant. I mean dont get me wrong I would have her get pregnant, but not for a while. But hey I dont know maybe it would be cool to have a pregnant Ziva and see Tony's shock. I once again enjoyed this chapter and can not wait to get on to the next^^
2/16/2009 c1 quibilah
I have to say that this was a very funny chapter to read. Tony and Ziva getting arrested the way they did made me laugh very hard. I was not really expected you to have Ari and Kate come into the story although I was sort of hoping that they were. I cant wait to read the next chapter^^
I have to say that this was a very funny chapter to read. Tony and Ziva getting arrested the way they did made me laugh very hard. I was not really expected you to have Ari and Kate come into the story although I was sort of hoping that they were. I cant wait to read the next chapter^^
1/29/2009 c5 12A Fanfiction Angel
Yay! Thanks for finishing this fic! It was really fun reading this
From A Fanfiction Angel
12A Fanfiction AngelYay! Thanks for finishing this fic! It was really fun reading this
From A Fanfiction Angel
1/22/2009 c5 67MyOwnWorstCritic
WHAT? NO! It can't end here! Why was Ziva still sorta un-Ziva in the last chapter?
Love the cow thing, I'm sure I mentioned it before.
67MyOwnWorstCriticWHAT? NO! It can't end here! Why was Ziva still sorta un-Ziva in the last chapter?
Love the cow thing, I'm sure I mentioned it before.
1/22/2009 c4 MyOwnWorstCritic
She WANTED to be pregnant. No, probably not it. AWESOME chapter! Yeah, see, semi is slang, and I'm not really familiar with American slang, but thanks for clearing that up for me!
Love the cow/semi thing. G-E-N-I-U-S
She WANTED to be pregnant. No, probably not it. AWESOME chapter! Yeah, see, semi is slang, and I'm not really familiar with American slang, but thanks for clearing that up for me!
Love the cow/semi thing. G-E-N-I-U-S
1/22/2009 c3 MyOwnWorstCritic
ooh, not good. And is Ziva pregnant? And (though I'm still not sure what a semi is) McGee is such a dork, yelling Semi! lol. The Kari is so cute.
ooh, not good. And is Ziva pregnant? And (though I'm still not sure what a semi is) McGee is such a dork, yelling Semi! lol. The Kari is so cute.
1/22/2009 c2 MyOwnWorstCritic
I'm not american, but what is Semi like something. Cause I know what semi-formal is, I know what the word means as a pre-fix (or whatever its called). But I do know enough to know that that scene between McGee and Abby was FUNNY AS HELL.
I'm not american, but what is Semi like something. Cause I know what semi-formal is, I know what the word means as a pre-fix (or whatever its called). But I do know enough to know that that scene between McGee and Abby was FUNNY AS HELL.
1/22/2009 c1 MyOwnWorstCritic
A!
KARI! You have just totally made my day (or night).
The BOMB! SOO A-W-E-S-O-M-E!
How are they gonna get gas?
A!
KARI! You have just totally made my day (or night).
The BOMB! SOO A-W-E-S-O-M-E!
How are they gonna get gas?
1/22/2009 c5 27greeny-blue lights
cow? okay, loved this! confused me...but it was hilarious!
a baby! yay, i love kari! great job!
27greeny-blue lightscow? okay, loved this! confused me...but it was hilarious!
a baby! yay, i love kari! great job!