for Flawless6/7/2012 c14 somewhataftertherain
really good! :D I LOVE YOUR STORY.
the character maybe a little bit ooc espescially noll, but it's acceptable since gene was back (yay!)
and i'm so curious about riel. Is he a future son of noll and mai? Please make a story about it. I love a family story. Hehehe
really good! :D I LOVE YOUR STORY.
the character maybe a little bit ooc espescially noll, but it's acceptable since gene was back (yay!)
and i'm so curious about riel. Is he a future son of noll and mai? Please make a story about it. I love a family story. Hehehe
10/17/2010 c2 
18Fairy of Music and Literature
OH MY GOD!
My... my tummy hurt! I don't think i have laughted that much with another story where appear Luella! You really did well! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
There should be more storys like this! (Without offending to others authors, sorry!)
18Fairy of Music and LiteratureOH MY GOD!
My... my tummy hurt! I don't think i have laughted that much with another story where appear Luella! You really did well! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
There should be more storys like this! (Without offending to others authors, sorry!)
8/10/2010 c14 9HandsomeAngel
"For the world, you are someone, but for the special someone, you are his/her world. You're not perfect, yet in their eyes, you're FLAWLESS.
When you met someone like that, keep them close.
No one predicted what would happen. No one expects what has to be faced. No one knows what will happen tomorrow.
Yesterday was history, today is a rally, and tomorrow is a mystery."
I love that last part. This is the 3rd time I'm reading this story. Nicely done!
9HandsomeAngel"For the world, you are someone, but for the special someone, you are his/her world. You're not perfect, yet in their eyes, you're FLAWLESS.
When you met someone like that, keep them close.
No one predicted what would happen. No one expects what has to be faced. No one knows what will happen tomorrow.
Yesterday was history, today is a rally, and tomorrow is a mystery."
I love that last part. This is the 3rd time I'm reading this story. Nicely done!
5/6/2009 c14 Thea
:) It is a wonderful story though it is some what confusing in at first but in the later chapters I understood it.
:) I had fun reading this...
:) Umm, may I ask if I can copy this qoute: "For the world, you are someone, but for the special someone, you are his/her world. You’re not perfect, yet in their eyes, you’re FLAWLESS.
When you met someone like that, keep them close.
No one predicted what would happen. No one expects what has to be faced. No one knows what will happen tomorrow.
Yesterday was history, today is a rally, and tomorrow is a mystery."
:) Please and Thank you...
:)
:) It is a wonderful story though it is some what confusing in at first but in the later chapters I understood it.
:) I had fun reading this...
:) Umm, may I ask if I can copy this qoute: "For the world, you are someone, but for the special someone, you are his/her world. You’re not perfect, yet in their eyes, you’re FLAWLESS.
When you met someone like that, keep them close.
No one predicted what would happen. No one expects what has to be faced. No one knows what will happen tomorrow.
Yesterday was history, today is a rally, and tomorrow is a mystery."
:) Please and Thank you...
:)
3/20/2009 c14 crazymel2008
i love this story even though its finished:( i hope u write another ghost hunt story or make another story to continue this one or just make a really bran new story)cant wait hope u write soon.
i love this story even though its finished:( i hope u write another ghost hunt story or make another story to continue this one or just make a really bran new story)cant wait hope u write soon.
3/20/2009 c14 Skyz-Angels
Yay happy ending! My favorite fic of all your stories! Hope you will write more ghost hunt fics!
Yay happy ending! My favorite fic of all your stories! Hope you will write more ghost hunt fics!
3/20/2009 c14 Moons-Chan
You better do another story for GH! They're so nice, though some grammar, vocab and sentence structure are wrong. But don't be down, because in fanfics, all those things don't matter much. Another GH fic please~~!
You better do another story for GH! They're so nice, though some grammar, vocab and sentence structure are wrong. But don't be down, because in fanfics, all those things don't matter much. Another GH fic please~~!
3/7/2009 c13 Raito Rein Shion Unknown
Raito: Woah...You really are a diligent student, Ao :0
Rein: Quite the opposite with you .
Shion: Yeah...You always study in the last day before the test
Rein: Never study for English test too, Shion
Shion: Yeah...right
Raito: Meanie...I always study about it
Rein n Shion: Never!
Raito: I AM!
Rein n Shion: NO, You're NOT
Raito: *Sulked in the corner*
Shion: What are you doing there, x? Why you censored your own fake name?
Me: That's for me to know and for you to find out *Evil Grin*
Shion: Speak properly please...=_="
Rein: Whatever. Just give Ao review and then...I could drag that idiot to study
Raito: EH? *Wide eye*
Shion: I thought you still sulked in the corner *Looked at Raito weirdly*
Me: Nice story. It's the first time I read your story and it's really nice ^^
Shion: Nice one, Ao. Good luck for you mid-semester test. We will try our best to make him *pointed at Raito* study too
Rein: Yeah. That's right. Good luck with it.
Raito: Nice one...Hiks...Good luck...Hiks...Save me! *Crying waterfall*
Me: Shut up! *Glare at Raito who immediately hide behind Rein*
Raito: Woah...You really are a diligent student, Ao :0
Rein: Quite the opposite with you .
Shion: Yeah...You always study in the last day before the test
Rein: Never study for English test too, Shion
Shion: Yeah...right
Raito: Meanie...I always study about it
Rein n Shion: Never!
Raito: I AM!
Rein n Shion: NO, You're NOT
Raito: *Sulked in the corner*
Shion: What are you doing there, x? Why you censored your own fake name?
Me: That's for me to know and for you to find out *Evil Grin*
Shion: Speak properly please...=_="
Rein: Whatever. Just give Ao review and then...I could drag that idiot to study
Raito: EH? *Wide eye*
Shion: I thought you still sulked in the corner *Looked at Raito weirdly*
Me: Nice story. It's the first time I read your story and it's really nice ^^
Shion: Nice one, Ao. Good luck for you mid-semester test. We will try our best to make him *pointed at Raito* study too
Rein: Yeah. That's right. Good luck with it.
Raito: Nice one...Hiks...Good luck...Hiks...Save me! *Crying waterfall*
Me: Shut up! *Glare at Raito who immediately hide behind Rein*