11/29/2009 c1 Chaosbahamut123
Hehe! Nice. Poor, poor Gippal and his unintentional allowances for Rikku's advances.

Very nicely done. Solid dialogue, accompanied by some humourous free indirect discourse that sums up Gippal's thorough confusion at Rikku's new behaviour.

12/25/2008 c1 2Sookdeo
cool. lookin forward to see what happens next :]

12/23/2008 c1 7DarkenedPetals
Aww very nice! Poor Gippal! Being teased!