for Home Is Where The Heart Is5/10/2012 c1 
11becsti
'the land before her was water and ice. Salt and snow. Barren and cold.'
i really really like this line, the pacing is good and it certainly sets the mood. the banter between the two is nice and natural
(can you tell i'm skilled at reviewing? :P )
11becsti'the land before her was water and ice. Salt and snow. Barren and cold.'
i really really like this line, the pacing is good and it certainly sets the mood. the banter between the two is nice and natural
(can you tell i'm skilled at reviewing? :P )
12/28/2008 c1 30AyanamiEraclea
That was all well and good. Nice job!
But I do have an inquiry about the ages of Dagbert and Persephone. How old are they in this?
30AyanamiEracleaThat was all well and good. Nice job!
But I do have an inquiry about the ages of Dagbert and Persephone. How old are they in this?