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34obsessive360
Gibbs would do this, but only for a fellow Marine. (*cough*Mac*cough*) Good story though.
34obsessive360Gibbs would do this, but only for a fellow Marine. (*cough*Mac*cough*) Good story though.
10/2/2009 c2 LizzyBennett
OMG you should so finish this... I love it...
OMG you should so finish this... I love it...
5/27/2009 c2 C3
It is good so far. You should have Ziva impress Mac and the NY team with her landuage skills or something. I will be waiting.
It is good so far. You should have Ziva impress Mac and the NY team with her landuage skills or something. I will be waiting.
5/18/2009 c2 40Tracey Claybon
You have the personalities down and the first two chapters are very entertaining. Looking forward to more!
(I love the crossover too!)
40Tracey ClaybonYou have the personalities down and the first two chapters are very entertaining. Looking forward to more!
(I love the crossover too!)
5/6/2009 c1 4GiggleSnortCharade
OH HO HO HO
This interesting beyond words
Really liked the Ducky and Sid scene at the start.
I'd love to see more! C:
4GiggleSnortCharadeOH HO HO HO
This interesting beyond words
Really liked the Ducky and Sid scene at the start.
I'd love to see more! C:
4/19/2009 c1 xxxxx
i love it! more please!
i love it! more please!
4/19/2009 c1 no one
Hey , this is great so far. I hope you plan on writing more and finishing. Marine versus marine - could be really hot :)
Hey , this is great so far. I hope you plan on writing more and finishing. Marine versus marine - could be really hot :)
4/6/2009 c1 20theslytherinprincess23
My to favorite shows in one and you nailed it. I love it. More, MORE! It is a great story and I love the smacked and Adam and Abby thing. Is there going to be any Danny and Lindsey? I really love them. Nice job and I can't wait to read more!
20theslytherinprincess23My to favorite shows in one and you nailed it. I love it. More, MORE! It is a great story and I love the smacked and Adam and Abby thing. Is there going to be any Danny and Lindsey? I really love them. Nice job and I can't wait to read more!
4/5/2009 c1 shawdoo
Great beginning. I hope you'll be adding more soon.
Mac vs Gibbs - classic! If you'd throw Kate into the mix it would be perfect. SMacked and KIBBS - WOW! Just my opinion, of course :-)
Great beginning. I hope you'll be adding more soon.
Mac vs Gibbs - classic! If you'd throw Kate into the mix it would be perfect. SMacked and KIBBS - WOW! Just my opinion, of course :-)