for Silenced7/7/2012 c1 Guest
HEY! i loved the begining. are you going to continue? i always thought the avox girl would be betting on katniss to die and suffer a painful death cuz she didnt save them but i like where youre going with the story PLZ continue. . ;)
HEY! i loved the begining. are you going to continue? i always thought the avox girl would be betting on katniss to die and suffer a painful death cuz she didnt save them but i like where youre going with the story PLZ continue. . ;)
10/8/2011 c1 inkkless
Nothing to say except what you already know: it's a great start, but you need to go somewhere with it. Without a body or any direction, it's simply a great start to nothing.
Nothing to say except what you already know: it's a great start, but you need to go somewhere with it. Without a body or any direction, it's simply a great start to nothing.
1/29/2011 c1 
1CatchingFire54321
Please update. This story has a lot of potential to it. Maybe you could write about the Avox watching the games, or something to do with president snow? Maybe you could change the story around a bit?
1CatchingFire54321Please update. This story has a lot of potential to it. Maybe you could write about the Avox watching the games, or something to do with president snow? Maybe you could change the story around a bit?
8/25/2010 c1 4KeTai
Like it :-D
perfect. Really. Great to read quickly a really nice peice
;-) :-) :-) :-);-) :-) :-) :-);-) :-) :-) :-);-) :-) :-) :-)
4KeTaiLike it :-D
perfect. Really. Great to read quickly a really nice peice
;-) :-) :-) :-);-) :-) :-) :-);-) :-) :-) :-);-) :-) :-) :-)
6/5/2009 c1 14MyLookOfDenial
I really liked it. Great fic.
I always wondered about that Avox and it's nice to read what you had thought. =D
14MyLookOfDenialI really liked it. Great fic.
I always wondered about that Avox and it's nice to read what you had thought. =D
5/25/2009 c1 13Fulgance
Wow...Why didn't you continue this? Is it abandoned or are you taking your time? The prologue is short but you manage to catch my attention in about two sentences. Please continue!
13FulganceWow...Why didn't you continue this? Is it abandoned or are you taking your time? The prologue is short but you manage to catch my attention in about two sentences. Please continue!
1/26/2009 c1 10An Ocean Under A Thousand Suns
wow this sounds really good you should keep it up. great job
10An Ocean Under A Thousand Sunswow this sounds really good you should keep it up. great job
1/10/2009 c1 5LC Black
Wow...it's interesting to hear the voice of the Avox girl. She's quite interesting as a character, and she seems to "understand" Katniss's thoughts.
Hmm...I simply adore your work...another story for the community!
[Oh...uh...I have a kind of favour...if you wouldn't mind, could you "join" my "Golden Mockingjay Forum?"]
5LC BlackWow...it's interesting to hear the voice of the Avox girl. She's quite interesting as a character, and she seems to "understand" Katniss's thoughts.
Hmm...I simply adore your work...another story for the community!
[Oh...uh...I have a kind of favour...if you wouldn't mind, could you "join" my "Golden Mockingjay Forum?"]