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1Zale136
I love this! Im really not a fan of crossovers at all, but this amazing! And It's very good considering the challenge of having to merge all their histories together. Amazing job. I love Colt's name :)
1Zale136I love this! Im really not a fan of crossovers at all, but this amazing! And It's very good considering the challenge of having to merge all their histories together. Amazing job. I love Colt's name :)
12/4/2012 c8 Fantasy.Rat.10
this is a really exciting story! _ I look forward to further installments, and am willing to help in any way: suggetions, possible corrections, and anything else like that.
this is a really exciting story! _ I look forward to further installments, and am willing to help in any way: suggetions, possible corrections, and anything else like that.
8/11/2012 c5 4C. R. Meadows
Other than a few misspellings and gramatical errors (which) there was very few of) this was a GREAT chapter!
4C. R. MeadowsOther than a few misspellings and gramatical errors (which) there was very few of) this was a GREAT chapter!
8/10/2012 c2 C. R. Meadows
You have such an odd plot design... lol. I'll have to read the rest later.
You have such an odd plot design... lol. I'll have to read the rest later.
8/10/2012 c1 C. R. Meadows
Wow. I'm really liking were this is going. At first Ivthought maybe you was trolling or slightly mental but your doing a really good job with the villains! I hope you don't start off strong then fade, because this is great so far.
Wow. I'm really liking were this is going. At first Ivthought maybe you was trolling or slightly mental but your doing a really good job with the villains! I hope you don't start off strong then fade, because this is great so far.
2/9/2012 c8 3CamiKlaus24-7
I love the idea with all of the different books movies and tv shows merging together. I really like how it has a plot but also a large amount of humor. Dean and his dragon made me crack up it was so funny and usually I don't like it when in a eragon crossover another person becomes a rider but I really liked how you made Dean a rider because its sorta fitting and he and colt are hilarious. I just think the plot is awesome. The only thing I can think of that needs work is that I think that the story could use some more detail and with all of the characters it's kinda confusing to keep track of. Still I really think this story is awesome update soon!
3CamiKlaus24-7I love the idea with all of the different books movies and tv shows merging together. I really like how it has a plot but also a large amount of humor. Dean and his dragon made me crack up it was so funny and usually I don't like it when in a eragon crossover another person becomes a rider but I really liked how you made Dean a rider because its sorta fitting and he and colt are hilarious. I just think the plot is awesome. The only thing I can think of that needs work is that I think that the story could use some more detail and with all of the characters it's kinda confusing to keep track of. Still I really think this story is awesome update soon!
7/18/2011 c8 5Forcystus5
Omg, omg, omg I was so happy when I got the alert. Man some times I thought you were dead, you have been gone for almost nine months. But, the chapter was good. So, I am guessing the next chapter will be Sam/Maleficent right? If so, will the alpha vamp show up and start turning elves? Oh that would be so cool. And they will be so powerful too. Please, update soon!
P.S if you are having writer blocks, just send the word and i will give you all the idea i am capable of.
5Forcystus5Omg, omg, omg I was so happy when I got the alert. Man some times I thought you were dead, you have been gone for almost nine months. But, the chapter was good. So, I am guessing the next chapter will be Sam/Maleficent right? If so, will the alpha vamp show up and start turning elves? Oh that would be so cool. And they will be so powerful too. Please, update soon!
P.S if you are having writer blocks, just send the word and i will give you all the idea i am capable of.
10/26/2010 c7 Forcystus5
You updated sooner than I expected and I am glad for that. Good chapter and please update soon.
P.S. if you are interested in my ideas of my last review about Ruby then you are free to use them.
You updated sooner than I expected and I am glad for that. Good chapter and please update soon.
P.S. if you are interested in my ideas of my last review about Ruby then you are free to use them.
10/18/2010 c6 4bookofshadows888
YOU ARE BACK!
Calming down, calming down. I've to say, you did not get any rusty during your hiatus. I just love the cliffhager, you really know how to get us hooked. És o melhor
4bookofshadows888YOU ARE BACK!
Calming down, calming down. I've to say, you did not get any rusty during your hiatus. I just love the cliffhager, you really know how to get us hooked. És o melhor
10/17/2010 c6 Forcystsu5
Man,, i forgot to say something on my last review. When will you include Ruby on your story? If your story is up to season 4 in supernatural terms, then she is still alive. Also, throught all season 4 Sam uses his powers that allows him to kill or exorcise demons with his mind. You could put that a demon atacked Sam´s group and eragon and the others watch Sam´s powers i action. As for Ruby, Sam will need more demon blood to keep using his power so she can be useful in your story, since there could be many demons more with the whole merging of worlds. These are my ideas but for the sake of your story to continue i allow you to write them down if you like it.
Please updaate soon
Forcystus5
Man,, i forgot to say something on my last review. When will you include Ruby on your story? If your story is up to season 4 in supernatural terms, then she is still alive. Also, throught all season 4 Sam uses his powers that allows him to kill or exorcise demons with his mind. You could put that a demon atacked Sam´s group and eragon and the others watch Sam´s powers i action. As for Ruby, Sam will need more demon blood to keep using his power so she can be useful in your story, since there could be many demons more with the whole merging of worlds. These are my ideas but for the sake of your story to continue i allow you to write them down if you like it.
Please updaate soon
Forcystus5
10/17/2010 c6 Forcystus5
Great! You finally updated! I am really looking forward to the moment when all the good guys gather together. Maybe the varden camp where Nasuada is might be a good place for that but, since you are the author, its your desition. I hope that it wont take you too long to update again because I really want to read more.
From a big fan
Forcystus5
Great! You finally updated! I am really looking forward to the moment when all the good guys gather together. Maybe the varden camp where Nasuada is might be a good place for that but, since you are the author, its your desition. I hope that it wont take you too long to update again because I really want to read more.
From a big fan
Forcystus5