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10LongLoreLover
I like this very much. I had been thinking about doing a POV from a girl who appeared on the roof-top in Manhattan, like they showed in the resolution at the end, and I very much approve the shady prolouge you gave, starting with the splintered views, from she to I. Very moving, and the way you ended this chapter definitely has me wanting to read more. My brain is a little dead from the midterms I had today, but I will reread this chapter tomorrow, and if you upload another chapter, I can give a better review. Do you, and take care; I encourage you to continue this...-LongLoreLover )
10LongLoreLoverI like this very much. I had been thinking about doing a POV from a girl who appeared on the roof-top in Manhattan, like they showed in the resolution at the end, and I very much approve the shady prolouge you gave, starting with the splintered views, from she to I. Very moving, and the way you ended this chapter definitely has me wanting to read more. My brain is a little dead from the midterms I had today, but I will reread this chapter tomorrow, and if you upload another chapter, I can give a better review. Do you, and take care; I encourage you to continue this...-LongLoreLover )
10/17/2011 c1 Jeffery
I like the sort of flash back you had in there. Very nice!
I like the sort of flash back you had in there. Very nice!
6/15/2009 c1 19Lightning Streak
Ooh, positively chillng! I think you did a good job on the physical description of this. Good job, and keep up the good work!
19Lightning StreakOoh, positively chillng! I think you did a good job on the physical description of this. Good job, and keep up the good work!