for Mr President2/26/2010 c1 
20Surreal Squirrel
Haha! Very funny, and pretty well-written! I loved reading it! Keep up the good work! :)
20Surreal SquirrelHaha! Very funny, and pretty well-written! I loved reading it! Keep up the good work! :)
11/13/2009 c1 Amanda
Hah! Such a cool idea. I liked the story. Here is my favorite line-
“You are taking this rather well, I remember Roosevelt took rather more persuading and don’t get me started on Regan” Helen complained
Good story. good job.
Hah! Such a cool idea. I liked the story. Here is my favorite line-
“You are taking this rather well, I remember Roosevelt took rather more persuading and don’t get me started on Regan” Helen complained
Good story. good job.
1/30/2009 c1 Snufalufagus
Nice idea. You need to pay a bit more attention to your sentence structure as there are lots of mistakes. Your very first line starts "She hidedeep" which makes no sense.
Nice idea. You need to pay a bit more attention to your sentence structure as there are lots of mistakes. Your very first line starts "She hidedeep" which makes no sense.
1/22/2009 c1 13Samantha McKay
As much as I love this story, and I do love it. I can't help but think that he'd have assumed the staff was playing a practical joke on "the new guy".
Well written, good story.
13Samantha McKayAs much as I love this story, and I do love it. I can't help but think that he'd have assumed the staff was playing a practical joke on "the new guy".
Well written, good story.