for The Day He Found Out3/4/2009 c10 
6LoZDCMVGfan
I loved the epilogue... Especially the last two sentences. The unknown man was never identified... and it was hard to believe Seven's behaviour, but apart from that... good work
6LoZDCMVGfanI loved the epilogue... Especially the last two sentences. The unknown man was never identified... and it was hard to believe Seven's behaviour, but apart from that... good work
3/2/2009 c9 LucyMelissa2400
Ah, I'm hanging here! I can't wait for the next installment. Brillant story.
Ah, I'm hanging here! I can't wait for the next installment. Brillant story.
2/8/2009 c9 LynnEGib
7 and Mark interesting couple I look forward to learning why and seeing J C happy
7 and Mark interesting couple I look forward to learning why and seeing J C happy
2/3/2009 c7 Jax
Good story. Interesting. The intent of the dialogue is spot on, but at times it seems too direct. Perhaps, let them show more than tell. Please continue.
Good story. Interesting. The intent of the dialogue is spot on, but at times it seems too direct. Perhaps, let them show more than tell. Please continue.
1/30/2009 c6 Gracie Taylor
Good story! Sad that her baby died, but a good twist about her an chakotay only being able to have a baby together!
Good story! Sad that her baby died, but a good twist about her an chakotay only being able to have a baby together!
1/29/2009 c6 17LynnEGib
This has to be the most creative way to get these two together that I have read. He needs her blood and she needs his sperm. I do hope they figure out they love each other and I want to know why Mark married her and killed her mother was he just crazy and /or hated her and had an interesting way to punish her
17LynnEGibThis has to be the most creative way to get these two together that I have read. He needs her blood and she needs his sperm. I do hope they figure out they love each other and I want to know why Mark married her and killed her mother was he just crazy and /or hated her and had an interesting way to punish her
1/28/2009 c5 Love Or Hate Me
Holy Crap! I just read the story. erm...the chapters hat are already in the story. Once again...Holy Crap!
Holy Crap! I just read the story. erm...the chapters hat are already in the story. Once again...Holy Crap!
1/28/2009 c5 Andrea J
I love this story and can't wait to read more. my email is . thanks for sharing your talent,
Andrea
I love this story and can't wait to read more. my email is . thanks for sharing your talent,
Andrea
1/28/2009 c5 LynnEGib
What would she have answered? Would she have told him she loved him? Will her blood save him now? More please!
What would she have answered? Would she have told him she loved him? Will her blood save him now? More please!
1/26/2009 c4 cartersg1
wonderful story more chapters please
wonderful story more chapters please
1/26/2009 c4 17CanonAntithesis
weird... i didn't see that coming. poor gretchen.
update again when you can. can't stand the suspense.
17CanonAntithesisweird... i didn't see that coming. poor gretchen.
update again when you can. can't stand the suspense.