for Jareth And The Pranks4/24/2010 c14
1FashionAvenue
I don’t know why you write so little in your stories; it’s really ** me off.
How about writing a real story. Also, if you didn’t have your beta, you would be a ** writer.
Your reviews in everyone’s stories is always ‘keep smiling, please continue’. How about coming up with something better. And why would an author follow your demands? What if someone doesn’t want to finish their story? Stop sucking up to everyone with your reviews.
I think you’re just a coward and can’t deal with the pressure of writing a real chaptered story. And STOP updating your old stuff, no one is going to read it. You’re blocking up the archive with your stupid and poorly written stories that don’t make sense no matter what beta you had to bribe to edit your stories.
Get a reality check, and learn to write.
1FashionAvenueI don’t know why you write so little in your stories; it’s really ** me off.
How about writing a real story. Also, if you didn’t have your beta, you would be a ** writer.
Your reviews in everyone’s stories is always ‘keep smiling, please continue’. How about coming up with something better. And why would an author follow your demands? What if someone doesn’t want to finish their story? Stop sucking up to everyone with your reviews.
I think you’re just a coward and can’t deal with the pressure of writing a real chaptered story. And STOP updating your old stuff, no one is going to read it. You’re blocking up the archive with your stupid and poorly written stories that don’t make sense no matter what beta you had to bribe to edit your stories.
Get a reality check, and learn to write.
3/6/2010 c14
16goblinphantomgirl
I'm sorry to see this story ended. It was funny while it lasted but i suppose it had to finish eventually. Thanks for a good read :) God Bless xx
16goblinphantomgirlI'm sorry to see this story ended. It was funny while it lasted but i suppose it had to finish eventually. Thanks for a good read :) God Bless xx
1/28/2010 c13 goblinphantomgirl
Hey, i like the way it backfired on him. I suppose technically he does belong to her, LOL. Funny chapter, well done, keep up the good work :)
Hey, i like the way it backfired on him. I suppose technically he does belong to her, LOL. Funny chapter, well done, keep up the good work :)
11/21/2009 c11
41Satan'sPixie
Lol, nice. :) I've had another idea, Sarah should start a water fight with Jarath for no reason.
41Satan'sPixieLol, nice. :) I've had another idea, Sarah should start a water fight with Jarath for no reason.
11/21/2009 c11
16goblinphantomgirl
Hey, good chapter. I know that it's Jareth's turn to prank Sarah back now but when her turn comes again, i think she should put a spell on his crystals so when he touches them, they pop like bubbles and for the whole day he has to do everything manually, dress himself, walk around etc because he can't use his magic crystals. It would be so funny. This prank idea is so funny, well done.! :0
16goblinphantomgirlHey, good chapter. I know that it's Jareth's turn to prank Sarah back now but when her turn comes again, i think she should put a spell on his crystals so when he touches them, they pop like bubbles and for the whole day he has to do everything manually, dress himself, walk around etc because he can't use his magic crystals. It would be so funny. This prank idea is so funny, well done.! :0
10/27/2009 c10
41Satan'sPixie
Lol, well done! I've had another idea, Sarah could constantly mimic Jarath behind his back. :)
41Satan'sPixieLol, well done! I've had another idea, Sarah could constantly mimic Jarath behind his back. :)
10/26/2009 c10
16goblinphantomgirl
Hey, this is such a fantastic idea it is so funny! LOL!
Jareth should make this rubber snake move and so when Sarah goes into the bedroom it would frighten her and chase her.
16goblinphantomgirlHey, this is such a fantastic idea it is so funny! LOL!
Jareth should make this rubber snake move and so when Sarah goes into the bedroom it would frighten her and chase her.
10/2/2009 c9
41Satan'sPixie
Lol, how funny! You could do one where Sarah gets a pair of glass doors really clean so that it looks like there is no glass there at all and create the illusion of a frech breeze so that Jarath walks into the door.
41Satan'sPixieLol, how funny! You could do one where Sarah gets a pair of glass doors really clean so that it looks like there is no glass there at all and create the illusion of a frech breeze so that Jarath walks into the door.
9/18/2009 c8 Satan'sPixie
Lol, I like Sarah's revenge! Very funny, I actually have a few more ideas. One of them could switch the salt and sugar around so that the other puts salt in their tea. Or they could hide fish in a random room so the room smells bad and then pretend that they don't smell anything. :)
Lol, I like Sarah's revenge! Very funny, I actually have a few more ideas. One of them could switch the salt and sugar around so that the other puts salt in their tea. Or they could hide fish in a random room so the room smells bad and then pretend that they don't smell anything. :)
