for Jareth And The Pranks8/27/2009 c7 
41Satan'sPixie
Lol! That was brill! Have had another idea, one of them could balance a bucket of icy cold watre above a door so that when it's opened the water spills on the person below.
41Satan'sPixieLol! That was brill! Have had another idea, one of them could balance a bucket of icy cold watre above a door so that when it's opened the water spills on the person below.
7/30/2009 c6 Charmshadow
Pfft. I know a prank that'll get on his nerves, get on his nerves, get on his nerves...
Find a treat for animals, cover it with icing, and say its a cookie.
Pfft. I know a prank that'll get on his nerves, get on his nerves, get on his nerves...
Find a treat for animals, cover it with icing, and say its a cookie.
7/29/2009 c6 41Satan'sPixie
Lol! YAY! YOU USED MY IDEA! :) Actually I've thought of another one you could use. Sarah (or Jareth) could blacken the edge of a coin and say to Jareth (or Sarah) that they bet they couldn't roll the coin down their face. When they do this it will leave a black mark down the middle of their face and then Sarah (or Jareth) would 'forget' to mention the mark. :) Nice use of the song btw.
41Satan'sPixieLol! YAY! YOU USED MY IDEA! :) Actually I've thought of another one you could use. Sarah (or Jareth) could blacken the edge of a coin and say to Jareth (or Sarah) that they bet they couldn't roll the coin down their face. When they do this it will leave a black mark down the middle of their face and then Sarah (or Jareth) would 'forget' to mention the mark. :) Nice use of the song btw.
7/18/2009 c5 sarah wilder
Haha extrenly amusing story! Your an excellent writer, keep up the good work
Haha extrenly amusing story! Your an excellent writer, keep up the good work
7/14/2009 c5 Satan'sPixie
Hey, I have an idea for a prank. Sarah could teach all the Goblins to sing 'I know a song that'll get on your nerves' and then get them to sing it over and over. Lol, this is so funny! :)
Hey, I have an idea for a prank. Sarah could teach all the Goblins to sing 'I know a song that'll get on your nerves' and then get them to sing it over and over. Lol, this is so funny! :)
6/13/2009 c4 56Temporal Austenite
That was awe-inspiring! I love the prank Ideas! I just wish i had a crystal. How awesome would april fools be then?
56Temporal AusteniteThat was awe-inspiring! I love the prank Ideas! I just wish i had a crystal. How awesome would april fools be then?
5/28/2009 c4 2Charmshadow
Heh. here's another prank, since this one was an x-ray spell, you can have Sarah cast invisibility spell on All of his clothes.;]
2CharmshadowHeh. here's another prank, since this one was an x-ray spell, you can have Sarah cast invisibility spell on All of his clothes.;]
4/26/2009 c3 4blood6theif
good job notwritten! this was very funny and i cannot wait for more! keep smiling =)
4blood6theifgood job notwritten! this was very funny and i cannot wait for more! keep smiling =)
4/26/2009 c3 2Charmshadow
Hmm, why does this sound familiar? ;] Nice work, you made it better than the way I had imagined it. I'm honored. (little victory dance) Yay, keep up the awsome work. ;]
2CharmshadowHmm, why does this sound familiar? ;] Nice work, you made it better than the way I had imagined it. I'm honored. (little victory dance) Yay, keep up the awsome work. ;]
4/3/2009 c2 Charmshadow
I think it was good. Want a suggestion 4 another prank?
Sarah records Jareth singing and sends it to itunes. Not really a prank, but it might get on the GK's nerves. ;)
I think it was good. Want a suggestion 4 another prank?
Sarah records Jareth singing and sends it to itunes. Not really a prank, but it might get on the GK's nerves. ;)
1/23/2009 c1 darkbangle
Your writing seems to be improving. I did see one thing you might want to fix. At the beginning of the third paragraph, "Sarah decided that she was going to do was to make his voice sound squeaky. By using a special crystal filled with Helium." should be "Sarah decided that she was going to do was to make his voice sound squeaky by using a special crystal filled with Helium." I've noticed this mistake often in your writing, so try to be conscious of that.
Other than that, I do wish you would actually write the characters speaking their dialogue rather than just relaying what they are saying. You have very good ideas and your portrayal of Sarah and Jareth's relationship is very cute. I look forward to seeing your writing continue to improve.
Your writing seems to be improving. I did see one thing you might want to fix. At the beginning of the third paragraph, "Sarah decided that she was going to do was to make his voice sound squeaky. By using a special crystal filled with Helium." should be "Sarah decided that she was going to do was to make his voice sound squeaky by using a special crystal filled with Helium." I've noticed this mistake often in your writing, so try to be conscious of that.
Other than that, I do wish you would actually write the characters speaking their dialogue rather than just relaying what they are saying. You have very good ideas and your portrayal of Sarah and Jareth's relationship is very cute. I look forward to seeing your writing continue to improve.