for Blood Drinker1/27/2009 c1 
1SparkintheDark
Its quite good! I love how you contrast how happy he is to be drinking her blood with his regret that he did not keep her and that her life was ended just for his thirst. It takes talent to fit so many emotions and feelings into so few words, something I was never good at.
1SparkintheDarkIts quite good! I love how you contrast how happy he is to be drinking her blood with his regret that he did not keep her and that her life was ended just for his thirst. It takes talent to fit so many emotions and feelings into so few words, something I was never good at.
1/27/2009 c1 lorilark
wow...very descriptive and chilling. I liked it. I never thought it was realistic for Edward to have had such control of his baser instincts
wow...very descriptive and chilling. I liked it. I never thought it was realistic for Edward to have had such control of his baser instincts