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4/25 c26 DaughterofDante
cute
4/14 c26 13sereneskydragonslayer
hahaha pride for throwing the rasengan
please update
3/11 c26 4BlackGryphon101
I Love this story please update soon I want to find out what happens next.
3/8 c26 11xXdiamondroseXx
Please. Please more. I haven't been this hooked on a story for a long time. Please I'm begging now. More! It's super fantastic to a point I'm even ignoring some grammar. Good job, now more. Like right now. xxxDR
3/5 c26 2luckycomet09
This is good, real good ] But are you still going to continue it?
2/6 c26 2Ezra Scarlet
AWESOME! . ! update,update,update,i cannot wait,i absolutley love ,please updae soon,ARIGATOU GOZAIMOUS!
1/19 c26 6xXChirushiXx
When is naruto going to show that he can use shadow clones. Naruto without that jutsu isn't Naruto :B
1/18 c26 xviolettx
Oooh. Interesting chapter. Looks like we'll be seeing more of Hiashi. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :)
1/4 c26 1otogii
its intersting im just wondering why naruto hasnt used any of his kage bushins i mean that is his iconic ability. also since naruto was a hokage wouldnt he be more able to handle gennin? your making it sound like genins are powerful... anyway gl intersting story
12/16/2012 c26 16suicidal-sinner
I love it! Great story and I love the characters and how naruto is portayed! I can't wait to see where you take this story! :)
11/21/2012 c7 silkyhair
I have a question that I couldn't get off my mind, so here it is. The DNA results are a bit off, I think. Since let's say, Minato has DNA MA (M from dad and A from mom), and Kushina has KB (K from dad and B from mom), Naruto's DNA combination would never be fully the same as Minato's. It would either be MK, MB, AK, or AB. And since full blooded siblings would have to have elements of both parents in their DNA (And surely Minato and Naruto don't have the same parents), it would be impossible that Minato and Naruto be full blooded brothers. So would you be willing to fix that?
11/19/2012 c26 Mcnitra
Great!
I hope Kakashi and Naruto will have a brotherly relationship.
Will Naruto and Kyuubi meet again?
10/31/2012 c26 DAFUNKATRON
Great Chappy, really enjoying this story so far.

Hopefully you update again relatively soon!

But don't slack off at Uni too much...
10/4/2012 c26 AbbaSalama
First of all i really love this story, its well done, very enjoyable.
although i dont really understand narutos strength level...it doesn't match up with what he should be-at least in my opinion.
hes a kage level shinobi in the body of a younger naruto-whos had the years necessary to 'retrain' himself...
i understand you dont want to make him overpowered...but thats not a good enough excuse as he was already overpowered(any kage is op)before he...de-aged.
another thing that disturbs me is his chakra level...just because he no longer has the kyuubi doesnt mean he has normal chakra levels...no his body was already effected by kurama.
of coarse this is all my opinion, im not even goina go into how he acts like a inexperienced child...because he IS a child atm-even tho the 'inexperienced' part shouldn't be there.
Basically even though hes in a childs body, hes still got experience/ability/chakra which is what sets shinobi apart from normal mortals to begin with.

That all being said, I do love you story telling tho, even if our ideas of shinobi strengths are different. great story, subbed.
10/2/2012 c2 Smozzick
Wow, for someone who was so upset that he tried to release the Kyuubi to kill the rest of his village, including any friends still alive and then TRAVELLED BACK IN TIME and had everyone potentially be alive again he sure is calm.

I'm surprised that someone else commented on the Yondaime being callous with "Prevent this, if forced, and if willed, shame on you." when, yes, he should be ashamed for nearly killing all of his village. Plus the Yondaime probably made that when the Kyuubi was heading towards the village to kill them all so he kind of has a right to be annoyed if someone wasted what he did. So, that part seemed fine to me, if a bit stiffly phrased.

Rubbish countermeasure though, if he'd only gone back a day and had done it willfully he'd just do it again and if it could happena gain then all it does is give him time to find a counter to the countermeasure /
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